Reviews for Paradise Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Mama always said "if you eat too many sweets, your teeth will fall out". That is priceless. So now Harry has two horcruxes (horcri? What is the plural, anyway?) vying for his attention. I do love the relationship between Harry & Tom, though. Friends, brothers, something else entirely? You've managed to capture Hermione so well. Her intelligence and her ways of thinking are so challenged by Harry, and she obviously adores Harry. Please continue as soon as you are able. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant and amazing, love it very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, the prank! XDDDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() No one petrified (or dead), that's good, especially as Harry still has the diary. And the revelations from the basilisk are interesting and probably shook Diary-Tom to the core. Dumbledore without teeth... how mean. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Though you may have made Voldemort a paedofile, no offense. I like Snape's character especially. He makes an awesome champion |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this chapter. although I have a few questions: is tom so attached to harry that he is unwilling to kill him to obtain a body? and is tom even planning to obtain a body now? also, where is dobby? and, is sirius going to make an appearance? cant wait to see where you take the story- inats |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL at the appropriateness of that lemon drop curse. And interesting that it took Tom a whole month to engage with Harry again. Was he puzzling out the horcrux, or just working out his anger, I wonder? Buddy!Snape is kind of sweet, in a believably Snapish way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol a toothless dumbledore! i love it! this was a good chp! I hope you update soon! ;) love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha! nice! lol! hahaha! a giant snake told me! love it! thx for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it! can't wait for the next chap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Tom and Harry's interaction in the dairy, hopefully they will get close, and soon him a Lord Voldermort will be close as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing story. cannot wait to see where you go from here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story and I add you as my favorite. All characters well written and I like that harry stolen stone! Only one thing, the James was chaser, not seeker, but nearly everyone make this mistake, dont worry. I only wonder, what happened to dursleys, have they been attacked by Wizards and Witches, who adore Harry Potter? And Albus always was for me indirect abuser, he left child on the steps with written note and newer visited family. Very strange! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great start to what's turning out to be a very interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter! |