Reviews for Paradise Lost
CrowNoYami chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
this was an awesome chapter! I am soooo imporessed and really really eager to read more of this story
brightsun89 chapter 4 . 1/22/2011
another wonderful chapter! do you know how you are going to end yr 2 yet? well anyway you end it Im sure it will be wonderful! :)
riddle-girl-lost chapter 4 . 1/22/2011
Beautifully written, love the plot! Poor Tom, he's probably having a brain hemorrhage thinking about all that! And I really like how you potray Harry, not too dark, but not too light either. All in all, brilliant!
sage-kkm chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
CeilingFan chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
Very interesting story! I only regret that it seems to be moving along a little too swiftly. I hope it slows down a bit as Harry gets older; some of the key points to your Harry's development (his sense of self-preservation, his interest/ability in the Dark Arts, his relationships with his House, etc.) are being stated rather than demonstrated...

Still, looking forward to reading more.
Shire Fey chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
I just started reading this and I have to say I am glad I found it. Good luck.
LaTiL chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
Woha, what a end of chapter! A really OOC Harry sometimes, and others just a Sly Harry. I really like it. And I loved that he has Herm with him .
sillysimms chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
Haha wow I love this already! I cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Shalette chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
So, Harry got the stone now, this should be quite interesting to see how this all turns out.
gredior chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
you are awesome
houquilter chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
Oh, you're good. I love the way you ended this chapter. Diabolical Harry at it's best. His conversation with Hermione was great, so logical. I hope you continue this saga soon, i can't wait to see how Harry handles things to come. Will you continue in this story or start a new post altogether? Whatever you decide, please continue!
Voldy's pink teddy chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Ooh, Harry is chilling at the end of this chapter. I wonder what he'll do with the stone. His character is just so haunting. He's not as disturbed as Voldemort was at this age, but it still worries me that he thinks of a nightmare spell as a minor curse. I guess it might be, considering some of the torture curses that are probably out there, but that's still a cold assessment for an eleven year old.

You’re welcome. Nonetheless, I wasn't trying to scold you. I don't usually go the whole nine yards and do strict MLA citation on this site, but it never hurts to acknowledge the author of a quote, even if he is long dead. For one thing, those lines from Paradise Lost are so awesome that people should know which story they come from so they can read it if they want to. I just read Paradise Lost and its sequel Paradise Regained over the summer, and I enjoyed them both immensely. I was kind of surprised that I liked them so much, actually, since I’m an atheist. Ironic, isn’t it?

Anyway, wonderful two chapters. I’m looking forward to another update.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
The more this goes on the less I can predict where it'll go, it's already so different! Oh, I can imagine how it'll end up -not pretty, I fear- and still the way things are playing out keep surprising me. Good!
brightsun89 chapter 3 . 1/21/2011
Yay! I love how you solved the quirrell problem! Its really good and I can't wait for you to update! keep up the good work and have you thought of 2nd yr yet? love it please update soon! ;)
BoomboomPOWWWW chapter 2 . 1/21/2011
Well, this will certainly be an interesting read! I'm really enjoying it right now! I really like it! D Keep updating!
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