|Reviews for Paradise Lost|
| Nylffn chapter 20 . 4/18/2016
Oh dear. It seems that I am a few years too late to review on this story, but oh well. This story is absolutely amazing. It's been for years or so since you last updated this story, or had any actions on ffn as far as I can tell. But still I'm going to beg like a dog for you to continue this story. I'm sure you get emails everyday to an email you've most likely completely forgotten about, pleading that you keep going. It's probable that you've lost your muse for this story, or perhaps some note you had on how you wanted it to go. Maybe those are the reasons you stopped. It doesn't matter. You left us at a cliffhanger. A cliffhanger that has a dangerous incline that you're leading us over in our anxiousness. Your bio said that you had a major in English, meaning that you've likely going off and gotten married or had children or something similar. Still though, I beg that you continue this story. I found this story in a rec, and I thought to myself, 'it's a WIP... I'll read it anyways, the summary sounds good.' I did and now you have me addicted. Please, please keep going. Maybe you stopped fanfiction in order to pursue dreams of becoming a writer, and I will encourage that wholeheartedly. But you cannot leave us here in the dark!
I await any sort of response with trepidation.
| Azera-v chapter 17 . 4/17/2016
Wish you hadn't given up on this great and unique story.
| 1.61803 chapter 20 . 3/31/2016
Just wanted to express my admiration for your writing. Hope to see another update sometime! Thank you!
| Gothazon chapter 20 . 3/15/2016
Ohoho Lucius and DAM DO I LOVE THIS VERSION OF HARRY
| Gothazon chapter 17 . 3/15/2016
I GOT IT RIGHT! I. GOT. IT. RIGHT. OMG HE WAS SO SIMILAR TO SEBAS-CHAN (heheh) AND I WAS LIKE NO. NOOO! OMG YAS YAS THEY DID AHAHAHAHAHA GO BLACK BUTLER! ANG ASDFGHJKL CIEL!
| rigger42 chapter 20 . 2/26/2016
This is so darn interesting and I'm so sad it stopped.
| Lizzy chapter 7 . 2/25/2016
I smiled a little at "two plus two adding up to five", could it be a reference to the renowned 1984, or simply just a well known quote you as an author have integrated anyhow?
| Shadow315 chapter 20 . 2/23/2016
I really, really hate Dumbles & Voldemort!
How f-cking dare he try and force his mark onto Harry?! Thank God Harry was able to stop it. ... please, please tell me Harry doesn't submit to him or be forced to?! And what about Tom? Tom I liked, ya he was sadistic & ya he was a jerk some times but he listened to Harry and I thought they'd be good together - Tom didn't seem like he'd dominate Harry so completely that he'd crush him - which Voldemort seems like!
But Harry just doesn't seem like he'd give in and let himself be dominated! At least not the way Voldemort wants to do. ... Please, please don't let Harry end up submissive like so many stories have him as!
And Dumbles! That ASS!
What about the mark on Harry's wrist? Are you going to explain or did you and I missed it?
Update soon, please! I wanna know what happens! I hope Harry finds out about the horcruxes and gets Tom back - maybe even gives Tom a body and kills Voldemort! (would serve that as-hole right!)
| Maddie chapter 20 . 2/22/2016
Oh dear god why is this not finished? It's utterly brilliant in its darkness and sadness! Beautiful work of art! I'm gonna save this in my bookmarks and hope and pray that you'll come back after all these years and finish it! It deserves to be finished! 3
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/18/2016
Very sneaky harry :)
| erikablair chapter 20 . 2/15/2016
Really good fic, I'm looking forward to the next update
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 13 . 2/11/2016
Okay ummmm, i hate to admit it but, Harry is kind of acting nd. H aha. This raw power that he's emitting is just... wow.
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 7 . 2/11/2016
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 6 . 2/11/2016
Again, new harry is bloody amazing. His makeover sounds so cute
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 5 . 2/11/2016
How can i do this in just a few words. Ummmmm, this dark harry is AWESOMe. I love him,and his two friends and that innuendo tom said,ha. I just love this