|Reviews for Paradise Lost|
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 2 . 2/11/2016
Oh my goah. Harry using that spell was well,hot. I mean...whew
| OtakuNewWorldOrder chapter 1 . 2/11/2016
I love it already
| Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 20 . 1/5/2016
Is it possible to Accio the Rememberball?..
Siren call... Is it Dark core of Harry's magic, or would any wizard be addicted?
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck, Draco, Harry, Lucius, Marvolo, Narcissa, Severus, Tom, Voldemort.
| FotoDi chapter 20 . 1/3/2016
Oh this story is awesomely dark and deliciously addictive. Yet, as I ponder your story's gleeful sadism, ever escalating acts of torture twined in S&M, as well as Harry's almost magic-driven, sub/conscious demand for respect, parity/recognition, and a kind of Freedom. He would choose death over being powerless. How can Harry ever be in any kind of 'relationship' when he is incapable of trust. With similar issues, Harry & Voldemort will have a tumultuous bond. Tom is older, physically bigger & stronger, knows 50-60 years worth of spells, ... But, Harry has intuitive gifts, unexpected alliances, and the power of Hogwarts to bolster him. Interestingplot points and character dichotomies you have set up! Yummy possibilities!
Yet, I cannot help but think that Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore is the biggest DANGER in British magical society due to his self-delusion and almost evangelical zeal: any means justify Dumbledore's chosen End.
The Dark Arts practitioners almost seem to be more fundamentally 'honest' compared to the Light Magic sheeple. The Slytherins, jaded by years of prejudice, know 'Power' is about 'Perception'. There are few if any abstract absolutes of Right & Wrong. Dark Wizards know that there is always a price to pay for power and do not expect "fairness".
Interesting ... I hope you continue with this promising HP tale some day. Thank you for jogging my brain cells!
| Katepatterson chapter 20 . 1/1/2016
You are incredible. Simply divine, as someone into the occult I am shocked at how well done your story is, how accurate and seamless it blends Harry Potter and tarot cards/runes. This story is beautiful thank you!
| carpediemdftba chapter 20 . 12/26/2015
I remember I started reading this story sometime in 2011, and I'd get super excited for updates, reading the new chapters between classes. I randomly decided to reread this story, and I'm really glad I did. I had forgotten just how good this story is.
This is a very well-written piece of fiction. The grammar is good, the characters are fleshed out, and the plot is super interesting. I really like how you have portrayed Harry's descent into darkness - how it started out with him wanting to be great instead of evil, but circumstances and tragedies pushed him deeper toward the dark road. I also really like the attention to detail you have with put in with runes - Norse mythology and anything therein related has always fascinated me, and your inclusion of Futhark made me really happy.
It's hard to believe that in about 3 months it will have been 4 years from your last update. I selfishly want you to keep updating this story, but if you don't - if you have too much going on or simply lost interest - I appreciate all the effort and time you did put into this story, making it as good as you have made it.
In the end, I just wanted to say thank you for this amazing story.
| xOphiuchusx chapter 20 . 12/19/2015
Fucking awesome. Arrive at chapter twenty excited to discover the update date, I am suffering. Your story is amazing. If you read this please continue your story, is fantastic.
| Julia Ba chapter 20 . 11/30/2015
It's a wonderful story. Thank you! It was a pleasure to read. I so love the stories where we can see what an impact Harry's childhood made on him. It always seemed strange to me that JKR described such an obviously abusive environment of H's childhood home but never the consequences of it!
Pity you left off where you did. And on such a cliffhanger!
Hope you're ok. May be there is another website where you post?
Anyway, what I've read was a great read! Thanks again!
| MaiWishes chapter 1 . 11/20/2015
| MaiWishes chapter 12 . 11/20/2015
Please tell me that wasnt the spirit of Voldy come to molest Harry because Im honestly disgusted. Then again even if it was Diary Tom sex seems out of place. Im looking forward to how Harry gets Tom back and what happens but I'm so weirded out right now.
| MaiWishes chapter 7 . 11/20/2015
For future ref in case anyone else is inspired to make a dumbles bashing story, Veritaserum and Pensieve memories can not used in court, also the Dark Mark can be hid.
| MaiWishes chapter 5 . 11/20/2015
Pranking Albus Dumbledore? Thats a new one haha.
Its must be said though Albus seems a dottery old fool in this fic. Like him or not for his machinations. Did Albus ever call Sev my boy? That sounds awful
| tulipity chapter 20 . 11/19/2015
| Meel Jacques chapter 20 . 11/12/2015
Ooohhh, why won't you keep writing this story? Please, continue!
| Meel Jacques chapter 19 . 11/12/2015
Well, Tom, do not be angry, it is only the true.