Reviews for Paradise Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Dumbledore, calling it a mistake implies you'd try and change what you did and endeavor not to do it again. You've made the same "mistake" at least thrice now. It is Willful Ignorance at best now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful... quite alluring |
![]() ![]() Absolutely amazing |
![]() ![]() Sk |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've twice referred to Harry's bottom lip as a Cupid's bow, but that expression is supposed to refer to the top lip...just FYI. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I LOVE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it Carnt wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would it be too much to ask if there will be more? This idea is amazing and i really love it a lot |
![]() ![]() wanhhh i cant wait toll the next chaoter! |
![]() ![]() I have to say,you are a pure genius! This story has officially gotten a tight leash on my curiosity. I absolutely love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it bad that I love this scheming, proud, deadly Harry Potter more than the others? Loved this story, hope you update it sometime. |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a Spade casually dropping by ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have never been so excited to read a piece that talks about runes and Old languages before. I was practically jumping up and down with your Old English and your Old Norse. I love old languages you see; I study them at uni. I can't help it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm fucking crying right now..This story had so much potential...and now its abandoned. I spent 4 hours reading this, missing my classes and everything. Author, if you ever read this, please update this story. I was captivated from the first letter to the very last period of the very last sentence. Finish this, please. |