Reviews for Paradise Lost |
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![]() ![]() This is addiction. Truly. I don't believe, that you dont have nothing more to write. |
![]() ![]() Please write some more. It’s good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() No offence, but I can’t imagine hugging my peers in school at that age, especially a girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is intriguing and well written. It flows so naturally. I am sad that 'real-life' has taken you away from completing this. I hope that someday you will. If not, perhaps a summary chapter to let us know where it was going? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kinda creepy, eh? What a pedophile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY did you have to do it? Oh poor Harry...poor Sirius...poor Remus! |
![]() ![]() This is so good I wanna fucking die - chapter 4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!THAT LAST SENTENCE MADE ME SO EXCITED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a pity this is lost to time. I want more of this story. |
![]() ![]() What's that? Oh, it's just Snape breaking out in hives. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This got so fucking violen n. It’s a shame it’s not finished, it was getting rather good if not a little OP |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're going to turn a lot of people into Harry/Hermione shippers with this I swear. OHHHHHH MYYYYY GOOODDDDDD WHYYYYY WOULD YOU LET THAT HAPPEN TO SIRIUS! There MUST HAVE BEEN ANOTHER WAY DEAR GOD. I CANNOT. So glad you skimmed it because HECK WHY! So sad. He has no happiness at all. I would kill Dumbledore fark |
![]() ![]() ![]() SUCH A FUNNY ENDING HAHA |