Reviews for Paradise Lost
hawkswench chapter 5 . 4/8/2017
how did Harry manage to get into his office? lol
Sasuke lover21 l chapter 20 . 3/15/2017
Please tell me your still working on this no scratch that I'm begging you to continue to work on this
duchessme chapter 20 . 3/15/2017
Love the plot
Cant wait for more
Watari chapter 20 . 3/14/2017
Omg is so so sad you left it like that I really liked this story
kyoshi711 chapter 12 . 3/12/2017
This wasn't a bad story up until this chapter. I don't like gay stories. You should have said it was gay at the start.
Darrk Rabbit chapter 20 . 3/5/2017
Nononono! THAT CAN'T BE IT! DDDx
How DARE you do this to me?
I neeed more of this wonderful story.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/29/2017
Doesn't Pendu mean end?
Jemjnz chapter 20 . 1/25/2017
Nicely well written with very exciting plot. I am keen to see where it will go.
Although am a little confused whether the dark shape from earlier is Voldemort or the new Demon (which seems kinda abrupt otherwise as he and Harry seem to know each other.
I like Harry's character and his friendship with Hermione, it just feels so natural. Well done
hotcat chapter 1 . 1/9/2017
Really hope you finish this story one day
violetkisses chapter 20 . 1/8/2017
I don't care how many years it's been since the last update. I SHALL WAIT.
Leis chapter 20 . 1/2/2017
I've re read this so many times but I've decided I can't ignore the glaring problems I have with this fic. Specifically, Hermione Granger.

First off, it's already establish in the first book that Hermione is a bit of a loner who's incapable of getting along with her house guests indicative of an isolating personality. By the sixth book, Rowlings demonstrates that Hermione does not like getting bested through Harry's success in Slughorns class. That being said, I find it completely unrealistic that Hermione would approach Harry and they would bond over their shared love of knowledge or magic.

Second, this obsession that fanfic writers have with Hermione being the be-all-end-all of witches is off-putting, the constant claims of her being 'the brightest witch of her age' and the declarations of her just morals is laughable. Severus Snape at 16 was modifying potions and creating spells, Tom Riddle was immortal, and the Marauders created an irreplaceable map alongside being Animagi. Hermione is merely book smart and Rowlings distinctively makes note of this through Hermione reiterating word by word texts and substituting them as answers in her essays and responses. Book Smart isn't intelligent and Hermione definitely isn't better than those listed above.

I don't know why everyone is incapable of writing Slytherin!Harry without making Hermione his best friend, it's lazy, disappointing, and tiring. You have the opportunity to explore different characters from different houses and yet authors always go back to Hermione. What about Nott whom Rowlings marked as a clever loner? There's a lot of potential yet authors continue to use the same characters for the same plot lines.
Fainfan chapter 20 . 12/27/2016
Omg that cliff hanger !
Fainfan chapter 15 . 12/27/2016
Omg that ending of this chapter.

Really sheds a light why Dumbles tries very hard not to kill Voldie.
As it was his fault Voldie was created after all
Fainfan chapter 14 . 12/27/2016
Waoh. U really portrayed Harry is such a "good bad" light. Really empathize with him now that he was condemn from the beginning.

The more you build up the relationship between him and herms. I would be really sad to see how Harry will explode if anyone hurts his lil sis
Fainfan chapter 7 . 12/26/2016
Fudge. That Sirius died just like that... was shocking
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