Reviews for Angel
CrazedBunnies chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I laughed through most of the story... o. o It was a bit awkward trying to picture Kuzu bottoming but I liked the ending C: It was cute
Dokuji-Chan chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This story is great! theres no need to hate it, it's very original and I never read one that used this plot line. Keep up the good work!.
Ninjagirl93 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
This story makes me laugh. Poor Kakuzu.
Alexa Hiwatari chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
cool
Jashinsangel0521 chapter 1 . 3/17/2012
awsome story!
KetsuekiNoAoiNamida chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
holy roman empire...

kaku0chan as an uke ? are you fucking serious ?

hahahah xD

omg that was really awesome ! (slutty fem-kakuzu sure is hot xD)

but, the guy they needed to kill, does he really exist ? Or did did you create him ?

...

I really loved you're story, except for one thing.

THE SMUT WAS NOT LONG ENOUGH !

and yes, you're story owned a ''YAYZ !'' x3 it was cute !

Oh and I really love the end xD

So .. that's all I have to say :3

continue to writh, you're great ;)

xxx

ketsueki.
Kalypso Fox chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Again, such a cute ending. Poor girly Kakuzu. I was scared for her being raped, thank you Hidan for saving her. . Loved it, lolz; girl-Kakuzu. xD "Kuzu-Koi"... That is just so kawaii. xD Oh, and I do enjoy me some Tobi. x3
akatsuki-kitten1 chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
hink that you should write two kakuhidans...
CAEL-TAiyo-Kurama-kage chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
XD!
Galadraen chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
Hmmm, I'll have to say the idea of Kakuzu being an uke is very foreign to me. Let alone him being innocent, crying, or anything else for that matter. To me he is always the tougher and less emotional of the pair. Hidan typically is the one shouting and making a ridiculous deal out of everything. A lot of the characters are was OOC. As always, most authors have minor spelling errors etc. Might want to look into some page breaks etc to just make the story look a little more clean. And honestly, I think the in-character Hidan would have let Kakuzu get raped and then laughed about it. They hate one another...(though they fight like a damned married couple) so usually establishing that maybe they've grown fond of one another is a must.

Other than that, interesting idea...it'll be nice to see where you go with this seeing as it is rare for someone to write Kakuzu as the "bottom" type.
Hiei's Ice Queen chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I really liked the story. It was well written. I usually wouldn't think of Kakuzu OR Hidan as bottom but it fit well.
LatyfeSurLeSora chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Its different but not to the point that it deserves that flame you got. If anything this is unique. I do recommend editing this and making it less jumbled. It can be confusing to read for anyone who hates clutter.
HornyWolf chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
Wow Kakuzu on bottom, finally something different! I almost rolled over laughing at the 'innocent Kakuzu' lol But seriously finally someone who did something different and didn't take 30,000 words to do it. Nice touch with the woman Kakuz, that's just what I imagined.
Kage no Akuma-Shadow Demon chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
i like it . i love this pairing it might be ooc but it's good oh and so you know assasination is spelled like this: assassination sorry for correcting you on that but i thought you would like to know .
The Akatsuki Wolf chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
1. Why did you read it ya dumbshit?

I dont believe in the whole 'hate' thing between them. alright? I wouldnt diss you for writing what you want. Hidan might let Kakuzu get raped in YOUR story.

want a Saso/Dei story? Write it yourself lazyass instead of gettin in my face. SUGGEST IT dont fuckin tell me what to write ight bitch?

, huh? pussy

5. there are thousands of assasinations like this that I've read, sogo an diss ALL of them. an yes. You spelled asassination wrong sweetie.

:)Have a fucking fabulous day