|Reviews for Dance in the Dark|
| 398.2 chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
This will always be my favourite Kain/Lightning fic :)
| denebtenoh chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
OMG THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL! oh please go ON! I cant have enough with it!
| Cam277 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
I loved this fic. You kept two of the most complex final fantasy characters in character - not a very easy thing to do, and yet,it works for this pairing. :) I especially loved the end when she told him to yield lol such a very Lightning thing to do.
Wish there were more Kain x Lightning fics out there like this one without Lightning getting 'soft' lol oh well...
You have a fan in me
| 261 chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
hahah great job kain.. this is awesome!
| Gunzaimyx chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Awesome story and very well-written. Love how you stayed true to the characters! Its rare to find Kain/Lightning fanfics. Job well done!
| L' Ame Force chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
Did you have Sephiroth pick on Lightning because tons of people see her as a female Cloud? XDDD Haven't played/watched FF7 in a long time, but the idea just makes me giggle...just because. I'll get back to that game someday, because I need to get reacquainted with the character he displays in his original game when I get around to writing in this fandom. Guess he got emoed in Advent Children? (my most recent viewing of any FF7 collection piece).
Anyway, I'm not a fan of Kain/Lightning at all (prefer Kain/Tifa and Lightning/Firion), but this was VERY well written. Nice job!
| xTsukuyomii chapter 1 . 7/14/2011
Love it! Do I spy Vaan/Terra? :D Please keep up the good work!
| thelizfantasy09 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
ohohohohohoohohooooohh 8D niceelly dooonnnee! 3
| animegrl357 chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
awesome fight scene and ending. :)
| Nirianne chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Wow! That was really, really good! It was great to visualize everything happening in the moment! You have great writing skills dear writer :)
I do wish there were more stories out like this where characters are in characters but yet, added personalities still fit them well. Description is very important in stories like this and you have executed it well!
Didn't expect the ending though... sneaky xD
I love it! Goes to mi fav~
| Fantasy's Reflection chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
This a beautifully written fight scene. You capture the exhilaration and intimacy of combat so well. Bravo!
| Kala Sathinee chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
This is awesome; exactly how I imagine them. And I love the ending.
And, of course, Bartz was adorable.
There needs to be more Kain/Lightning on this site.
| flowerangel050 chapter 1 . 4/18/2011
LOL at the whole 'bizarre interest' with Lightning.
The ending of this~~ omg 3
| Mortem Archer chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
A very nice little fic. I do wonder how Lightning would've reacted to it, though. I enjoyed it, especially the end bit about Kain not being a normal knight. Nice job.
| Vincentre chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
D'awwwww. This is as close to romance as you can get with those two stubborn warriors. Anyways, I loved your description and use of personification. Adds to the emotion.