Reviews for A Necessary Gift: A Harry Potter Story
Proper the Incredible chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
absolutely brilliant! plz update soon :)
Yana5 chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
why don't you tell snape thst orion is Harry. it might make him a bit happier that he didn't really fail
zeichnerinaga chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
god! sirius and his griffindor attitude! it's going to get him killed!

i really hope he don't, maybe someone (hint harry/orion hint) can take the curse off of him, or he isn't stupid enough to try the ring on in the first place (like bumblebee, sorry dumbledore was ) what would become out of harry otherwise. would he have to grow up with sirius grandparents? wouldn't be too bad i think, but in that case he would have a lot to explain. :C

well, anyway, great chapter, though it could have been a bit longer(not that i'm complaining), great story in general, and the changes in the prologue are great, too, i've already read it to find back into the story.

good work! :D

p.s.: i would add this story to my favorites if it wasn#t already there ;3
Schnuff chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
ah the last chapter...so i hope you continue AND finish this great story...anyway thanks for sharing
god of all chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
0TruestBlue0 chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
Wonderful update! :D

Seeing Severus and Sirius attempt to get along is just so precious.

Hopefully Hermione will understand soon...though bright she is only eleven.

I wonder what Harry will get Sirius for Christmas?

Can't wait till the next chapter!
Schnuff chapter 15 . 1/15/2012
mmh 2 problems, one with the werewolfs and possible help them and at the same time get on the better side of Snape (my guess).

and Neville, most stories are just about how dreadful Harrys childhood was...but Nevs was far from happy too.

so good work
Schnuff chapter 14 . 1/15/2012
again a very good chapter. i like to read about how the people in the stories think and act...the whole background.
Schnuff chapter 12 . 1/15/2012
It's hard do judge a character just after a few encounters.

so i wont. on the other hand, this story earns more and more respect from me.
kjate95 chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
Loved the chapter and can't wait to see whats going to happen next! good luck!
Character8021 chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
Great Story!

I am hoping for Harry/Daphne.I also think that you should make daphne more cold to people(Ice queen persona,so no giggling)and warm to Harry/Orion when she falls for him.
Schnuff chapter 10 . 1/15/2012
yup, the sorting done with Hermione as wild card and (this time) Orion as an sort of Mentor for her
Dazaniel chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
hey, just saying that i'd like to see some more hermione bashing, i dont really like her. if thats okay with you. apart from that this story is doing good, keep going!

thanks.
Cozman10 chapter 16 . 1/15/2012
Very well done, can't wait for more!
YukiAme chapter 17 . 1/15/2012
Sirius is going after the ring by himself? Darn it, that sounds dangerous.

Hermione is learning: her response to Pansy was great. But she is only a first-year with many Gryffindor tendencies, so she can't do everything right at once.

I like how you're painting the stratified situation in the Wizarding World: both at school and at the Ministry through Harry's and Sirius's eyes respectively. It's deeply engraved, and no matter now successful they become in changing things over years, there still will be considerable opposition. In fact, if Voldemort is discredited well enough prior to his return, Umbridge can be a much more dangerous enemy, one that can't be just killed and be done with. Footswitch is also doing a number on impressionable minds, a less noticeable but lasting damage.

Draco and Snape are so in character, it's uncanny.

Looking forward to more
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