|Reviews for One Wish|
| Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
This isn't bad for a first one-shot story.
I did catch some errors, while reading: In Sam's second dialogue, the "be" should be replaced with "been", "Middle Earth" needs to have a hyphen between the two words, and "earth" should be decapitalized, and "destoryed" is spelled as "destroyed". Other than these errors, the story is free from them. If you can catch anymore, that would also be good.
I understand why Sam thought those things, when he and the readers thought Frodo was dead in the books, which obviously he wasn't, but was still unable to wake up for hours from the wound Shelob gave him.
Still, good work.
| Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
It's so sad Poor Sam.
| Melilot Millstone chapter 1 . 3/19/2002
That is so sad! I started crying when he wished that Galadriel would let them trade places. It is really good. Please write more LOTR fanfic.
| Arien chapter 1 . 3/19/2002
Aaaw, poor Sam. Very nice, could have been a little longer but nice all the same.