Reviews for Lost Soul
Guest chapter 2 . 9/21
Grammar...OMG

Bella went to counseling ON DOMISTIC VIOLENCE? ON? WTF?
Surely you meant that she went to counseling FOR domestic violence...not ON.

It just makes the characters sound like idiots!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21
So bella went to view the house and just as she told her real estate lady she would take it...her belongings pulled up in the drive way. That's interesting don't you think? You would think that you would have to fucking PAY FOR THE HOUSE before you could move your shit in! There is paper work ya know?

Besides that serious mistake there is some grammar issues in this first chapter that need your attention.

I really hope you didn't write a human alice with visions. That would really suck, I hate it when writers do that. Because Alice was crazy in her human life for a reason, human brains aren't meant to be capable of that sort of thing. But once she became a vampire...well I guess her brain was strong enough to handle it. I just don't think its any good in a human story.
genevieve blanc chapter 17 . 5/28
I love this story and was wondering if you are going to finish it?
Guest chapter 17 . 8/9/2016
Yay! A new chapter! I am glad Bella told Jasper about the emotional abuse. Poor Edward wanting to be corporeal so he can hold Bella...I feel so sorry for them finding each other and still being so far away! I watched a movie once where the ghost was haunting a girl and actually had relations with her! Is Edward jealous of Anthony? I lnow Anthony looks like Edward but he thinks of Bella as a little sister..sorry it has taken me a while to read your new chapter but I haven't received any new alerts. As always I am your dedicated reader...twifam1
That Artist Girl chapter 17 . 5/30/2016
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY! It is so beautiful and amazing and I NEED more!
twifam1 chapter 17 . 4/18/2016
I need to apologize to you. I am just reading this chapter. I loved it! I can't wait to see how Bella and Edward develop their relationship. I am hoping Bella will be able to see Edward at some point. Even if only in a dream. I am so glad you haven't given up on your story like so many others have. The story is great and when it's completed I'm going to read it all again from start to finish! ! We are looking forward to the next chapters that you have stated are exciting! ! I am still here stalking your story but I haven't been on the site as much lately because I haven't had time. But as always I remain your dedicated fan...don't give up!
telaviv chapter 17 . 1/23/2016
Loved it so much!
Please update soon
Amelia S James chapter 17 . 1/18/2016
Brilliant chapter don't stay away so long this time.
sassy973 chapter 17 . 1/18/2016
Loved it hope you update soon.
DutchGirl01 chapter 17 . 1/17/2016
Absolutely adored this chapter, great work as always. Please update soon?
brittany86 chapter 17 . 1/17/2016
Wow been a long time, poor bella, but I hope you update sooner again
Suzy-Chapstick chapter 17 . 1/17/2016
I was so happy to see an update in my inbox, and you didn't disappoint! This was a great chapter!
cbmorefie chapter 17 . 1/16/2016
Thanks!
Britmom chapter 17 . 1/16/2016
Great chapter, thank you! I'm so glad you're continuing with the story, it's my forward to the next instalment.
pnkats chapter 17 . 1/16/2016
I've really missed this story. I'm confused by Anthony. In this chapter he didn't seem to be so bad. Of course I prefer Edward to him. Is Anthony just pretending? Again I still wonder how Bella can ever be with Edward since he's a ghost.
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