Reviews for Firefly in Summer
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
Rose killed herself, why? Because she knowingly
threw her sister to a pack of wolves, and then
told her to suck it up? She was an innocent and
was harshly defiled by SEVERAL big men. Rose
had a choice, Bella never did! I just... I want to
see their world crumble and fall apart. I want to
see them called out like the bastards they are
and brought to justice in a very public way!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 10 . 7/31/2014
He's been trying to get her to drink his liquor
for a while now ... he's not turning down this
opportunity; for the conversation OR the drink!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 9 . 7/31/2014
Sounds yummy. I will have to order one next time
I go to Red Lobster. Sounds like it's be really good
with crab legs. Living in Michigan sucks as far as
good shellfish is concerned. They over cook the
shrimp, and NOBODY serves good old steamed
blue crab with tons of Old Bay. *sigh* a Firefly
would e PERFECT with those. (Those I left behind
in Maryland would scream blue-bloody-blazes that
only a cold beer should be drank with them, but I
HATE beer, so...)
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 8 . 7/31/2014
So, whatever happened to HER, also killed her sister?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 7 . 7/31/2014
I just ... *sniffle* I feel so much for her heartache.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 7/31/2014
At some point, there HAS to be a real conversation...
and I am afraid he's going to return to his one night
relationships soon. She turned him aside for 'more,'
so I can't rightly blame him, but still ... that's gonna
be an ache all it's own.
When are Carlisle and Esme going to become a part
of the story, or are they not at all?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 7/31/2014
She needs someone she can open up to.
Obviously, this has to do with an older
sister in whose limelight she was forced
to live, and a boy who used her horribly
to get to the sister.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 7/31/2014
Our first hint of the hurt of the past...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 3 . 7/31/2014
Wow. He has a really cold, hard edge to him.
Bella strikes me as wounded and scared. She
has probably been through a lot of pain. He
had better find a pair if kid gloves...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 2 . 7/31/2014
Poor guy ... and girl!
I think it's interesting that Uncle Peter
talked endlessly about Edwars to her,
and even Mrs Cope seems to see her
as a real possibility for his future and
healing. Hmm...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 1 . 7/31/2014
Who was Peter?! Why is CRlisle an asshole?
Is Edward in Seattle? Am I asking too many
questions? LOL
Hi! I'm Mary, AKA MzPeaches. Everybody's
been rec'ing this for ... well, forever. I just
got through DRotuno's two series, and
decided to come here next. It'll take me a
bit to get through this story, seeing as I have
a very hectic schedule. I'll pop in and say my
piece about the chapters as I read. I'm very
vocal! LOL
NanStew chapter 3 . 7/24/2014
Nice set-up so far. Can't wait for more fireworks!
NanStew chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
That did not sound like Carlisle that I know and love. Oh well, will find out later what's up. Deb sent me. I'm getting caught up on her stories. At Blood and Glory now.
LilMelxx chapter 47 . 7/17/2014
I found this in Story Favourites on another authors page, and started it because I was bored. Well. What a roller-coaster! I absolutely love the why you have written this story and the characters. For a while my brain was whirring as I read as fast as I could. I couldn't work out how Rose's death had to be a mistake or misunderstanding, maybe she had attempted suicide and Renee blamed Bella and that's why they were estranged. But then her suicide and funeral was explained and I was all "WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA"

Geez and don't even get me started on Bella drowning! I'm at work and I'm reading and my eyes are tearing up! I thought Edward HAD to get to her in time, or she'd be found unconscious but alive. But then she was dead and I was devastated and wondering if I'd found a story without a happy ending (I don't read books and fanfiction for realistic - I want everyone to be happy in the end!).

So I'm shedding a few tears and trying to soak them up with a tissue without being noticed. (Luckily I am quite stealthy and I work with men who really don't pay much attention).

But then Edward managed to time travel! That was such an unexpected plot twist! Phew. I was really worried about them for a while! Edward saves Bella, Emmett saves Rose, and the tracks are laid for everyone to get a happily ever after! HUZZAH! I really did love this story, and I know that it's going to be one I come back to and read over and over.

I really enjoyed your writing style. Sometimes it can be hit and miss on sites like these, an author might have a great plot line but a terrible way of writing it (I read one story that was very VERY concise, but it had the potential to be an amazing story).

Sorry this seems to have turned into a short story! I'm bad at reviewing after each chapter because I'm too impatient, but I seem to make up for it with mega reviews at the end! In short, thank you for sharing this with us! And I'm off to troll your page for other stories :)
scc318 chapter 15 . 7/15/2014
Good freaking grief. That was just cruel!
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