Reviews for Firefly in Summer
psymplemind chapter 47 . 11/2/2014
Thank you for sharing this incredible story with all of us! Keep writing whether you share or not...you're already excellent but the more you write the better and better you get :)
psymplemind chapter 36 . 11/2/2014
I never did understand why she went early...she had to know it would drive her crazy to see him but not touch him...
psymplemind chapter 34 . 11/2/2014
Pregnant Jessica married to Mike! But it would sure look bad to Bella after seeing the photo in his mom's purse :)
psymplemind chapter 31 . 11/2/2014
Nothing ever worked out right for me in the long run (and it's been a LONG run...) came so close, but no...that's one of the main reasons I read love stories...in most they DO get their HEA...and that makes me happy
Your story is so well conceived and written.
psymplemind chapter 24 . 11/2/2014
:'( but in a good way
psymplemind chapter 23 . 11/2/2014
Difficult for Bella to believe but difficult not to!
psymplemind chapter 22 . 11/2/2014
Don't know if you watch OUAT but their season finale last summer was two hours and Emma and Killian fell through a portal that took them back in time before Snow met Charming and Emma accidentally messed up their meeting and had to reset the timeline...adorable wonderful episode.
I mean really, you wouldn't believe someone if they said they were from the future (or the past). That's why Claire hasn't told Jamie or anyone yet, but she will! (Outlander).
psymplemind chapter 21 . 11/1/2014
Well done. 2 thumbs up
psymplemind chapter 18 . 11/1/2014
So so beautiful
psymplemind chapter 17 . 11/1/2014
So so long ago but i remember those parties...it wasn't at a party but after a football game...in the parking lot with stadium lights...my friend (besties boy/girl lovers/pair...the boy) had been telling me about this long time friend that was transferring in to our school and he wanted meet meet him...(he'd been in a private school but his parents went severely bankrupt, and his father died in the process...) Howard said, "here he comes now". I turned to see the boy and it was absolutely positively like those moments in cinema...like Edward getting out of his Volvo and walking/strutting across the parking lot...almost identical...time kind of slows down and you see each other and nothing is ever the same again? That's why I believe in love at first sight...it struck us both in the same moment...he was as affected as I was! The beginning of an amazing journey/love story...
psymplemind chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
:)
Wouldn't it be wonderful to go back and change that one thing...even if it want losing them...but you knew they'd be alive and hopefully happy... :'(
:)
psymplemind chapter 15 . 11/1/2014
Good chapter...
psymplemind chapter 14 . 11/1/2014
This chapter devastated me (originally). I've rec'd this story to many...hope some of them read it...
psymplemind chapter 13 . 11/1/2014
People (especially children...younger than Bella was at the time, but it can be any age) often feel guilt when someone they love dies or is killed! They think they caused it or contributed to it and often say nothing out loud to anyone. It can totally mess with a person's head! Need therapy or group therapy in MANY cases! Bella is a person that needed a tremendous amount of counseling/therapy and got nothing. I just teach psychology now but once upon a time a was a therapist. Cannot tell you how many young people (teens and twenties) want/need help and their parents deny them yelling at them "there's nothing wrong with you", "it's all in your head", (!) "get over it). DENIAL. If there's something wrong with my kid what does that say about me? There can't be anything wrong because I'm perfect. Variations...
psymplemind chapter 12 . 11/1/2014
Here comes the saddest but then awesome part. The first time I read it...when Bella drowned i cried and cried but then I noticed there were a ton more chapters and I figured Bella's dying wasn't the end after all...but I did not see the foreshadowing with this chapter's time travel talk! Good play!
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