|Reviews for Firefly in Summer|
| stmurr chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Wow. After that, I'm not sure how to react. I just found your story today after some ladies on twitter were talking about it and so glad I did.
So, it can't be a dream in 2004 about the future because he's looking at a picture of Bella (taken in 04) from 2009, right? right. But it could be a dream in 2009 about 2004, right? Hopefully not. I really hope the time travel talk was all foreshadowing and that's where you're headed.
I love good angst and, honey, yours is awesome. Only three other fics have made me cry. This one, the conversation between Dead Bella and Edward, where he finally tells her he loves her...Just a lesson on why you don't wait.
| EchoEra chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
I'm so confused!
But there's hope for them so I'm happy!
Does Edward know that that is the night Bella and Rosie were attacked?
Can't wait for the next update, thanks for sharing.
| detroitangel chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
I am sobbing like it's my own pain. The way you write is a gift. I have been so entrapped in this story and in the strength of these characters that I honestly broke at these last two chapters!
| BeaCullen91 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Is she really dead?
| Kerry981 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Omg what a chapter!, spent most of the time reading it in tears (yea im emotional lol) i was hoping she was just in a coma or something but when i got to the end what a twist in the story! so looking forward to the next chapter!
your story is so amazing btw!
| SBS76 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Ok, I have to admit I nearly fell out of my chair reading this chapter. I was like "NOOOOOOOO!" But then I got to the end and was like "time travel!" *wipes forhead theatrically* Excellent story! I can't wait for more!
| spazmatazz chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
I'M SO STOKED for what's next! This twist in time is made of awesome. I'm SO excited for them to meet again. eeek!
This was so sad and so beautifully written.
"All the words that he'd been saving for her, undeclared, unclaimed, finally escaped him, and his cheeks were wet as he walked back home, exhausted. His dreams were gone. He'd left them behind, scattered on the sand, waiting to be eaten by the ever-encroaching tide. If not her, then nobody."
| idkmuch chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
I'm still quite a bit weepy from delivering my 2nd child earlier this morning, but this chapter just about sent me over the edge. I'm so in love with your beautiful words. You're such a master of showing us Edward's agony & despair - through his actions, his convos & his hallucinations. You've even redeemed Carlisle for me.
Now, I'm still hella confused as to what exactly is happening - time-traveling? Epic dreams? I mean, he did say he wished he could go back & save her. I dunno...but I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| bemily chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Oh, this whole time I am thinking coma. Then as the months go by, I am thinking she is going to have some serious brain damage to be in a coma this long. I love it when I am wrong. But I didn't think you would really kill her.
Now though, I am excited about the possibilities. Can he save everyone or just her? I mean, I thought it was so tragic what Emmett had done and just how there wasn't much coming back from that so how was it going to fit? But if we could hook Emmett up with Rose? And Peter? Could we get him on some kind of a health kick? How far could this go? Just yay!
| brandie722 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
WTF! I'm totally confused!:(
| mcgt chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Um? So it was a dream? He's been given a chance to change the future?
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| cdd12 chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
You made me cry and tripped me out all in one chapter. Loved it!
| shellwrx chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
Holy crap! I'll admit, I was really holding out hope that you didn't kill of Bella, but this twist is even better. So question is was he dreaming about the future or is he dreaming now? Either way I'm intrigued and amazed by your genius. He's going to meet her, save her and love her, changing the course of events. Yes? Well, I hope anyway. Beautiful as always.
| blueXsun chapter 15 . 4/12/2011
oh my oh my oh my. that hurt to read. but am very hopeful & excited about where it's going to go from here. i see now why all that time travel talk has been scattered throughout the story. :)
thanks for writing! love it. xoxo