Reviews for Firefly in Summer
psymplemind chapter 18 . 11/1/2014
So so beautiful
psymplemind chapter 17 . 11/1/2014
So so long ago but i remember those parties...it wasn't at a party but after a football game...in the parking lot with stadium lights...my friend (besties boy/girl lovers/pair...the boy) had been telling me about this long time friend that was transferring in to our school and he wanted meet meet him...(he'd been in a private school but his parents went severely bankrupt, and his father died in the process...) Howard said, "here he comes now". I turned to see the boy and it was absolutely positively like those moments in cinema...like Edward getting out of his Volvo and walking/strutting across the parking lot...almost identical...time kind of slows down and you see each other and nothing is ever the same again? That's why I believe in love at first sight...it struck us both in the same moment...he was as affected as I was! The beginning of an amazing journey/love story...
psymplemind chapter 16 . 11/1/2014
:)
Wouldn't it be wonderful to go back and change that one thing...even if it want losing them...but you knew they'd be alive and hopefully happy... :'(
:)
psymplemind chapter 15 . 11/1/2014
Good chapter...
psymplemind chapter 14 . 11/1/2014
This chapter devastated me (originally). I've rec'd this story to many...hope some of them read it...
psymplemind chapter 13 . 11/1/2014
People (especially children...younger than Bella was at the time, but it can be any age) often feel guilt when someone they love dies or is killed! They think they caused it or contributed to it and often say nothing out loud to anyone. It can totally mess with a person's head! Need therapy or group therapy in MANY cases! Bella is a person that needed a tremendous amount of counseling/therapy and got nothing. I just teach psychology now but once upon a time a was a therapist. Cannot tell you how many young people (teens and twenties) want/need help and their parents deny them yelling at them "there's nothing wrong with you", "it's all in your head", (!) "get over it). DENIAL. If there's something wrong with my kid what does that say about me? There can't be anything wrong because I'm perfect. Variations...
psymplemind chapter 12 . 11/1/2014
Here comes the saddest but then awesome part. The first time I read it...when Bella drowned i cried and cried but then I noticed there were a ton more chapters and I figured Bella's dying wasn't the end after all...but I did not see the foreshadowing with this chapter's time travel talk! Good play!
psymplemind chapter 11 . 11/1/2014
Incredibly well done...
psymplemind chapter 10 . 11/1/2014
Good ch
psymplemind chapter 9 . 11/1/2014
Sweet Edward...
psymplemind chapter 8 . 11/1/2014
It's crazy retreading something. I forgot the Rosalie part. I just remember her death then the time travel aspect. Incredible love story. But the fine details were gone from memory. I read tons of ff. recently mainly Captain Swan (OUAT) and Delena (TVD). Remember certain stories for main plot but lots of fine detail drops away after awhile. Your story I thought of as more of a sci-fi Edward Bella love story!
psymplemind chapter 7 . 11/1/2014
Excellent
psymplemind chapter 6 . 11/1/2014
Good chapter
psymplemind chapter 5 . 11/1/2014
Haha. I lived without a phone for four years. Before cell phones. Only landlines then. Out in the wilderness. The nearest neighbor was 1 mile down the road on one side and 1 1/2 on the other. 700 acre 'franch'. We both had a day job and his family in town so we had access to a phone but not at home. Four blissful, peaceful years! Honestly I didn't want a phone so i could get away from my family (in another state, far away! ).
psymplemind chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
Shy Bella. Player Edward. Ha. Not for long. :)
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