Okay, several things. John called Sherlock Pierre. When Howell first meets John accidentally at the elevator John is described as blonde & blue eyed when he is in diguised supposedly as a black haired, green-eyed man. Also, Howell said John was engaged when his cover was married to Sherlock. Sherlock & John were referred to as engaged throughout the rest of the story. I didn't like how John suddenly wasn't as tough as he was at the beginning of your story. Howell is just going to get away & is anyone going to save his wife? I don't see how John would'nt try to save her & not realize that she's being abused. Characters are just dropped like Scout & Stone. I would imagine that MI6/SIS wouldn't let them go so easily after all the training that they put them through & the cost of said training. I can see them like the A-team of sorts, but working for the SIS where they are given jobs & then are virtually left to their own devices to solve them. Their base of operations although would be at 221B Baker Street. The following: Lestrade just dropping his feelings for John, his sudden feelings for Mycroft, his seemly resolved feelings for his murdered wife, suddenly liking men, John never learning of Lestrade's feelings for him, Sally noticing his feelings for Mycroft not his feelings for John? Speaking of Sally, where was she during the initial hospital scene? However, despite all my issues with your story I did enjoy it.

i am so confused right now

oh my god the drama

Noooo mycroft loves Greg!

I love this so much! Make John have to work and be a total boss at it!

i really really hope u make john a bamf sorry for the bad language i dont usualy cuse but i really really want him to just kick butt! i love it so far!

Loved it! Thank you!

Very sweet

Love it

I love your description of "Soldier John".

Really love your writing. You're quite talented.

Just a small note for future reference:
Fiancee Female
Fiance Male.

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OMG! thankyou so much! your an awesome writer. WEDDING! and im not the biggest moriarty fan but it would be intresting to see an element of moriarty again in the threequel? a son, or nephew maybe? *Devious Grin* hehe well anyway i loved both stories and cant wait till you write other stories! :D xxx

wow, I go offline for ten days and you finish a story! hah!

heheheeeee... I don't really know what to say! I suppose well done for finally finishing and I see this turning into a trilogy or quadriligy O.o is that even a word?