Reviews for Spiral
Luminille chapter 1 . 2/15/2015
What a lovely prelude to their epic romance! I can definitely see it happening XD. What stood out to me were the mentions of the sending and traces of Al Bhed resentment. And Baralai helping Rikku aboard the machina - unnecessary because it's Rikku, but cute nevertheless. Thank you for writing this!
Shauna chapter 1 . 2/7/2011
Short and sweet, simple yet eloquent. Not a pairing I expected but you made it work. Especially by drawing a comparison between Rikku, Baralai and Yuna's parents. A delightful read :)
Miso chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I love these two together. Most people think that they are wrong for each other because she's too hyper and he's reserved or that 17 and 20 is too big of an age difference. I personally think that they are great for each other. She's the one to encourage him to unwind and enjoy life while he teaches her to be calm and enjoy one's company without bouncing around everywhere.

Anyway...great story.