Reviews for My Other Half
TrillionSchiffer chapter 3 . 4/13
Damn... where is your story building?

Damn... no caution at all huh... just going for gusto...

Do you even care if the story makes sense, or was the goal just to put words on paper?
TrillionSchiffer chapter 1 . 4/13
LIke the 'waste no time' scene. But damn...
Kerrion chapter 31 . 1/8
Please come back and finish this.
hannaha11104 chapter 13 . 10/14/2017
I am reading this wonderful, awesome, intriguing and unique story again. I can’t help re reading it, it is definitely in my list of top 10 all time favorite stories. I know I will read it again and again and hope that someday that it will be finished. Thank you for sharing this wonderful and imaginative story with all of us.
jdc0630 chapter 20 . 10/10/2017
OMG, it was so beautiful !
I can't imagine a day spent like that...someone who loved me
so much to show me the wonders of the world they have experienced
with me.

So Beautiful...

Thank you for sharing it with me...

I hope you have plans of finishing this is wonderful !

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Guest chapter 31 . 9/23/2017
Where are the other chapters :( this story was going so good
anyeshabaner chapter 31 . 8/26/2017
charlie should become a vampire it would be the best. and please do update the storry please dying to know about next and the babaies and carlisle and the family dynamics.
LadySixx chapter 31 . 7/6/2017
Loved this chapter, I really think Charlie should be a vampire and he can be a real asset to the security of Edward and Bella with his grandchildren and give him a mate also
Frankie09 chapter 31 . 5/4/2017
Very interesting story- please update
PoseyRosey chapter 31 . 4/5/2017
I just finished reading this story, it is really good and I hope that one day you will have the time to finish it.
Nonita chapter 1 . 4/1/2017
First of all, I hope you and your family are in good health..It's been almost 5 years since the last update, do you plan to continue with the story? Certainly I would not mind waiting for an update as long as I am sure there will be an update...This story is incredible and I would love to continue reading it..Please do not take my comment wrong, my intention is not to reclaim you for not having updated in a long time..Only you know the reasons that have prevented you from doing so...I just want to know if we can hope to see this story finished at some point.
Thank you.
sandeezy chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
Please update! I have been waiting since 2012! I cant wait any longer. Please complete the story
sandeezy chapter 31 . 12/13/2016
Wow! I woulf like charlie to remain human and meet another woman! Please update! Its been far too long!
hannaha11104 chapter 31 . 10/23/2016
I do hope that some day you do finish this story because it is beyond excellent and I would love to know what happens next. Oh and as for the question I would say Charlie as a vampire so she could keep her dad with her forever and who he should end up with, I want to say Tanya but I just have a serious hate for her character so I would say maybe Maggie from the Irish coven or maybe Irina because I think she should be with someone better than Laurant. So thank you for writing this story because it is absolutely amazing and unique and I would love to see it finished one day!
The90sKid chapter 31 . 9/29/2016
It would be cool for Charlie to become a vampire but as a human he would be good too. As a human he could end up with Sue and as a vampire it could be Tanya? or one of the maid or guards? I don't know maybe if he ended up with Tanya, Edward and Bella's bubble wouldn't pop up whenever she is near?
I love the story, one of my favorites, lost count of how many times I've read it.
I'd love for you to finish it :)

Love, Andy ;)
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