|Reviews for Adventures of Enchantment|
| TimeShard13 chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Ha ha. This is hilarious!
| Forever Day chapter 3 . 5/16/2012
Very funny and you wrote a line which should have been said by several characters a long time ago ('I am not blind or stupid and you are not subtle')
Also, Arthur's thinking that Merlin had tried learn how to save him with magic was new which was nice (I don't think people realise the amount of reveal fics I gleefully read) and Gwen just getting the kiss over with without babbling was a relief.
| Samwise O'Keefe chapter 3 . 10/31/2011
Made me laugh. Arthur's comments in part three tie up well with what Merlin had said in part 1.
Gwen was just great!
| Samwise O'Keefe chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
More "Tinkerbell" than "Faery Queen". Cute and pretty.
| magentamom chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
OK. I honestly have to say, "Well, how many future kings do you think I know?" may be my favorite line of fan fiction lines ever. LOL. I can just hear him saying it.
| Whirlwind421 chapter 3 . 7/18/2011
I really liked this last chapter. That is one outcome I have not read before! I would really like to read some more of. While the ending was funny, I thought it was rather sad too. Poor Merlin.
| Samwise O'Keefe chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
| Sailor nova 1 chapter 3 . 7/5/2011
| Words-Of-A-Fallen-Angel chapter 3 . 7/4/2011
| Schuikichiro chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
liked it... i found it very funny and light hearted
| Random chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
You know what, I think this is exactly how Arthur would react.
| SupernaturalGeek chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
Your kind dedication for this chapter caught me completely by surprise and made me blush :) That was so nice, thank you!
I thought this was very cleverly done, the way you had Arthur react and the fact that it gave Merlin a chance to skirt round the magic issue after his accidental reveal. It felt exactly like something Arthur would do - assume Merlin was merely fumbling and 'having a go' rather than being gifted with natural talent - as did Merlin's indignant but then resigned reactions.
I also really liked the underlying tone of affection when Arthur admitted that he does notice and appreciate what Merlin does for him. You managed to make it sweet without taking either of them out of character, especially the way Arthur managed to turn it into a backhanded compliment by also listing all Merlin's faults! That always makes me laugh when he does it on the show and you perfectly recreated that tone here.
As before I chuckled more than once but I think my favourite bit was the fact Merlin kept count of every gross thing Arthur ate as a frog!
Thanks again for the dedication and I'm more than happy to have reminded you that you had an extra chapter to add to this - I really enjoyed it.
| finn1013 chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
Just found your fic, and it was great, so funny! Loved it.
| LivingInTheClouds chapter 3 . 6/29/2011
Well, I must say, that is a rather singularly unique way of handling Arthur's reaction. I don't believe I have seen it handled in such a way in any of the Merlin fics I have read. I actually rather like it. It's realistic, it's unique, it is ever-so-completely ARTHUR, and Merlin's thought process is detailed enough that I can just see it from his stand point perfectly. And honestly, Merlin's newfound resolve and hiding-but-not from Arthur is just hilarious. I honestly love it. Great job.
| ruby890 chapter 3 . 6/29/2011
that was great. so does he know and chosee not to say anything to urthur AND merlin just act like it never happened or does he .