Reviews for Wrong Life
Thechit chapter 16 . 2/17
How his way of talking to her has changed, now that he knows it's Hermione. How he loves to tease her...
Serennos chapter 24 . 2/2
Thoroughly enjoyable, cheeky ending. Thanks very much.
Serennos chapter 16 . 2/2
Hermione’s an absolute riot...
Serennos chapter 5 . 2/2
The wryness Of Hermione’s thoughts is very entertaining...
Serennos chapter 2 . 2/2
Great storyline and writing style...
TripleLLL chapter 24 . 12/6/2020
Thank you for writing this.
ilydracomalfoy chapter 10 . 11/24/2020
i like the plot but i feel like hermione is really ooc in this book
PenelopeMoss chapter 13 . 9/24/2020
I'm really enjoying this premise. I'm definitely going to keep reading to find out what happens next - you've got me hooked. The only thing that's really bothering me about this story is Hermione. The Brightest Witch of her Age would surely have a bit more spunk and smarts in this situation. Is working in a Muggle bookshop really the only thing she can think to do (and only after being kicked out by Draco)? Would she really rather be a housewife in Malfoy Manor raising a child with a man who hates her, in a family and community full of blood prejudice? It just seems like she'd be stronger than that, and more resourceful, even if she does want a baby (surely adoption is a possibility?). Anyway, apart from that, the plot has really sucked me in. It's an original concept and I'm super interested.
Gretas chapter 1 . 9/23/2020
It's an interesting, fun, evening read. Only thing is that it's littered with typos, and sometimes very confusing ones where "was" is used instead of "wasn't" and "could" instead of "couldn't" etc, which will cause a bit of a hitch in the story where you'll need to go back and reread bits of the paragraph to understand that it's just a typo.

Also, this is more of a personal preference but I can't help but to be disappointed that Hermione never got recognition by the public in the end, even if Draco and Harry knows, and Molly suspects, I feel like Hermione wouldn't want to live the rest of her life as someone else (including the public knowledge of being an unfaithful wife) and only truly be herself to only two people, and also hide the fact that the real Astoria died and was not given a proper funeral and farewell, it feels like one of those moral things Hermione wouldn't dismiss.
linhlinh2712 chapter 25 . 8/31/2020
Hello my name is Alice. I am translator from Viet Nam. I really like your fiction and can i translate it from Vietnamese and of course it nonprofit. Hope you will answer me .
Love you , Alice
Happy chapter 24 . 7/2/2020
Okay, so I KEEP rereading this. It’s one of my all-time favorites. I wish there were more of their story. I don’t know what it would be, but... anyway, I LOVE this, and you definitely managed to “leave ‘em wanting more.” I really like the pacing of this one. There. I just figured out part of the secret. Really great!
Happy chapter 19 . 7/2/2020
OMG - love this!
Bele chapter 24 . 6/5/2020
Love that wink to Mrs. Weasley, poor Astoria, and yeah, being pure blood cones with a lit of expectations and responsibilities, so poor Draco too. I hope their dream child will be everything they wished for. thank you for sharing this story with us!
Calindy chapter 25 . 4/24/2020
Always come back to reread! Just the best
cshen.julienne chapter 24 . 3/30/2020
OMG That is so GOOD and weird but good! I LOVE IT
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