|Reviews for Longing|
| Yaw613 chapter 8 . 7/18
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
| Guest chapter 8 . 5/25
I want more
| Guest chapter 7 . 5/14
FREAKING AWESOME! Keep it up and i might as well give you a crown.
| Test chapter 1 . 5/10
| Anon chapter 8 . 3/29
Love the series, but it's left open. If you are getting bored and tired of this fine, but can we get one last chapter to end it.
| Rom the vacous spider chapter 8 . 3/14
Fucking great story ! Really loved it !
| JPalto chapter 7 . 2/28
Awsome story. I love the setting of the scene on a distant planet with no moon and blue plants. Very good indeed!
One minor grammar complaint though:
"the need for air became to much"
"wondered if Sissy and I were having to much sex"
Both of these should have been TOO much. Remember to add an extra "O" (for a total of TWO "O's") when talking about quantity.
Wann dem Führer wüsste
| Kat chapter 1 . 2/14
Its good but it should have a movie or a video
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
How about sissys freind does the same thing to Johnny as bumper did to sissy and sissy like Johnny saves him and then sissys freind says she was working with Janet *DUNDUNDUN* and then so sissy and Johnny go on another and they encounter bumper and Janet are dating and they all fist fight
| Wolfdude1111 chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
Do you know how short 5' 11 is my younger brother who is 15 is taller than that heck when I was 14 I was taller than that
| Wankmaster72 chapter 2 . 12/5/2015
| jack chapter 8 . 11/20/2015
Fucking awesome and I RARLY swear
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/16/2015
I fucking love this. As for the Janet plot that you are having trouble with, might I suggest a reverse rape? Have Janet and her girlfriends tie Johnny up and attempt to rape him while Janet is yelling at Johnny that this is all his fault, that he should have been her boyfriend and not Sissy's, that she is the popular one, the beautiful one and so on. Then before Janet is able to get Johnny's dick in her Sissy comes to the rescue just in time like Johnny did for her. This way Johnny will finally know why Sissy hates Janet and what type of messed up bitch Janet really is.
| Holden Pyle chapter 8 . 8/15/2015
Yeah I really like this chapter and I have a few ideas or maybe just one or so for the next one for baby one after this I mean the one after the one after this what you can do is like pulling a header on the chapter that describes like what they been doing for the past few years or so then they you can put some sort of filler and tell the sex scene have it go for oh although how long you think pink is it with Johnny flowing the most come he is ever blow into sissies room and then ended with CC telling Johnny that she had stopped taking her birth control
| creampie chapter 8 . 8/3/2015
Type your review lyk more of a twist to the plot