Reviews for Longing
Guest chapter 2 . 12/12/2017
Say Vega a
Ethan chapter 8 . 11/26/2017
That was another great chapter in your story, please keep on writing more chapters, love your work and I can not wait for more
eaglechase4355 chapter 8 . 6/10/2017
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
king69 chapter 8 . 4/11/2017
Love this chapter
Guest chapter 7 . 12/2/2016
just do an janent and sissy and johnny 3some. And maybe johnny with susan and mary
Yaw613 chapter 8 . 7/18/2016
Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/25/2016
I want more
Guest chapter 7 . 5/14/2016
FREAKING AWESOME! Keep it up and i might as well give you a crown.
Test chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
Anon chapter 8 . 3/29/2016
Love the series, but it's left open. If you are getting bored and tired of this fine, but can we get one last chapter to end it.
Rom the vacous spider chapter 8 . 3/14/2016
Fucking great story ! Really loved it !
JPalto chapter 7 . 2/28/2016
Awsome story. I love the setting of the scene on a distant planet with no moon and blue plants. Very good indeed!

One minor grammar complaint though:

"the need for air became to much"

"wondered if Sissy and I were having to much sex"

Both of these should have been TOO much. Remember to add an extra "O" (for a total of TWO "O's") when talking about quantity.

Wann dem Führer wüsste
Kat chapter 1 . 2/14/2016
Its good but it should have a movie or a video
Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
How about sissys freind does the same thing to Johnny as bumper did to sissy and sissy like Johnny saves him and then sissys freind says she was working with Janet *DUNDUNDUN* and then so sissy and Johnny go on another and they encounter bumper and Janet are dating and they all fist fight
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