Reviews for Eyes Like Open Doors
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 37 . 6/7/2011
Great job. Please keep writing.
rao hyuga 18 chapter 37 . 6/7/2011
things make much more sense now :) i also liked naruto's part in here as well, definitely changed things up. can't wait to see the next shot!
Kari-Kateora chapter 36 . 6/7/2011
Oh my God, that was my favorite one in a while. XD Sorry I didn;t comment on the last two chapters, but I was kinda busy. Still, this was a brilliant read! I can't wait until you update again. 33333

Only the end feels a bit odd. Tenten being alive. Why did he wait until that exact moment?

Also, I'm not sure why Hanako was disqualified. From what I could see, she wasn't acting much different from Hinata. She didn't want to hurt Hisoka and had only hurt him in self defense. Really, her behaviour wasn't inappropriate at all, unlike Hisoka's. Any move she did pull wasn't out of the logical bounds of any regular Chuunin preliminary; Gaara and Lee fought harder, I mean. That's why I don't understand where naruto's getting her 'hate for Hisoka' from.
Franoncrack chapter 36 . 6/6/2011
in a sea of crappy Nej/ten stories you are the one beacon of hope. THANKYOU!
kenzinator chapter 36 . 6/5/2011
Awwhhh! Neji and Tenten had twins! This really reminded of the fight between Neji and Hinata at their Chuunin Exams. I just find it hard to read about family fighting each other, especially brother and sister. I understand why they're fighting though. And Tenten's alive? This should be interesting. I wonder why she was upset? Hmm...I guess I'll just have to wait andd find out! :)

Keep up the good work! :D
kenzinator chapter 35 . 6/5/2011
So, I just realized that I didn't review this chapter...I loved reading this chapter. Reading about Neji and Tenten finally getting together is one of my favorite things to read. There's just something about it that keeps me wanting to read more!

Keep up the good work! :D
another wannabe author chapter 12 . 6/5/2011
Good choice for the flowers. This one was veeery good... one question I have would be who exactly you are portraying as Hinata's partner? My first guess would be Sasuke since Ino and Sakura (and Tenten) got jealous, but if that was because they felt lonely then I guess I am mistaken. I know you mentioned before that you want us to decide who Hinata is with, so I have on question; who do you think she should be with?
another wannabe author chapter 11 . 6/5/2011
Even though this type of scene is generally cliche, you wrote it in a way that I felt as if it were the first time I have ever read something like it.
TotTyrer chapter 36 . 6/5/2011
:O oooooooooo :O

wow! i really do love all of your stories but this one has just caught me (if you get my drift) why didn't naruto tell him ooooo why did she accept it :O i can't wait for the next half

SnowCharms chapter 36 . 6/5/2011
Wow, just... wow. This was like deja-vu all over again, except that this was more painful and heart-wrenching to read. I hope you update soon, I really want to know what will happen next. Update!
rallybabe89 chapter 36 . 6/4/2011
Ugh silly hatred. This entire thing is so frustrating for the young children. I hope this story continues with a happy ending!
rao hyuga 18 chapter 36 . 6/4/2011
wow...kind of confused but i really liked it. can't wait to see what's up with tenten and whatnot.
DarkAnonymous324 chapter 36 . 6/4/2011
I'm so glad that Tenten is alive. Please update very soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.
NoaShi chapter 3 . 6/4/2011
When Neji fought Kidoumaru and almost died, I swear I wanted to cry. It makes me happy that you decided to write the aftermath with Team Gai.

- NoaShi
NoaShi chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Beautifully written. You definitely kept them in character.

- NoaShi
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