|Reviews for Beyond the Lies|
| Eccentric Harmony chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
Funny how this is set just a few days from now.
Anyways, please continue this. I was thinking Mary actually told Peter about Carin (and Candice) but hmm. Maybe he connects the dots by the time he sees them? How does he feel? And I would love to find out how Meredith reacts! I bet she's furious at both Peter and Ruthie at first, but forgives Peter eventually. After the incidence with the kids and Ruthie, Meredith will be a little reluctant accepting Carin because she doesn't feel ready and it's all unexpected. But she'll get to know Carin and grow to love her and try to be a better mother to the girl than Ruthie ever was, and go as far as convincing Carin she's her mother.
| CNJ chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
Good chapter! I liked Peter's perceptions here; also loved his quote on FDR. I love that quote also.
Love how you captured Simon's brows; Simon does have lovely thick, thick eyebrows that are so moveable.
Enjoy your trip...can't wait to see more!
| CNJ chapter 2 . 2/2/2011
Great chapter! Good, vivid thoughts going thru Peter's mind; you're depicting his character very well. I always liked Peter and Meridith; they were both sweetie-pies.
Hard to imagine Meridith badmouthing anyone, even Ruthie. But it was funny how they nicknamed Ruthie *Ruthless,*: I laughed out loud at that one.
| Thegirlwiththedragontattoo chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Hey it was an awsome start of a story and is this begining after Ruthie get send to prison?
| CNJ chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
Great start! I take it this is concurrent with *Outside Heaven*? Good seeing Peter's POV. Are you going to have Meridith's POV's also or just Peter's?
Can't wait to see how this unfolds, esp. with how the others react to Ruthie's being jailed...hope Peter and Meridith do win custody of the kids; neither Ruthie or Martin make good parents at all.
Can't wait to see more from you!
| Kelsie chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
This is a good start but you can't leave outside heaven cuz I gotta know what's gonna happen in the epiloge!
| b.i.f.f.y chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Good start Nikki, another classic of yours! :D I love Outside Heaven as you know, and I'm really ancipitating this story!
| Eccentric Harmony chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
This is a good start, and I'm looking forward to reading Peter's side of the story over the course of the coming four years in the OH-verse. :D
It isn't *that* uncharacteristic of Meredith to be calling anyone a bitch. :P But Ruthie, yeah, no. :O Peter should tell her off. :/ Wasn't she pissed at her about Martin to begin with?
Emmy and Savannah are adorable, and I suddenly want you to work on the sequel once again! :D I haven't thought about it for months until reading this! :O