Reviews for Ashes of the End
Bookworm813 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
That was amazing writeing, but also very sad. Your a great writer
RadiantSky chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
All I can say is that I loved this story! The way you showed how Bart realized true angst was tearful and loved reading it.
ffefryn chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Wow, you did a great job with this. Very vivid, powerful imagery, and even without his usual swagger Bartimaeus is very in-character. I really like the first paragraph, the way the fire equalizes everything. Great writing!
Sadman2007 chapter 1 . 1/29/2011
That was unbelievably good. I am astounded by how you got that much emotion in that little amount of words. Good Job!