Reviews for The Players
rubyblue100 chapter 32 . 1/30/2017
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KristosLilly chapter 2 . 10/16/2015
Love Beth in this!
KristosLilly chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
Love the start.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
Quit watching soaps and writing garbage, you retarded 56 yr old!
whitedwarf chapter 16 . 12/12/2012
Okay, don't kill me or anything please ;D But when I first flicked onto this story-the summary intrigued me! I wasn't expecting for Antonio and Theresa to be the two siblings but I like the way you've intergrated most of this characters into the plot pretty seamlessly too.
I was suprised to see the format of the dialogue in the form of a screenplay type thing but it wasn't offputting and it certainly didn't take away from anything or make the diaglogue seem any less sofisticated! I've never actually tried writing my own stories that way but you seemed to really make the idea of possibly trying it in the future very appealing to me! I'm very much a Sheridan/Luis fan Fancy hater because of how 'true love' fancy and luis were seem to be by the Harmony inhabitants and I can just imagine some pretty cool verbal arguments that this form of dialogue would make easier than say 'he said, she responded' etc evry time! So, there, you ought to be proud of yourself you have INFLUENCED me!

:D Well done! It was a suprisingly enjoyable read considering the mainer characters but VERY good! And I look forward to more impatiently:D
SHAUN chapter 6 . 2/20/2011
NICE JOB!UPDATE REAL SOON PLEASE!)
SHAUN chapter 5 . 2/8/2011
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SHAUN chapter 4 . 2/4/2011
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SHAUN chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
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SHAUN chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
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SHAUN chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
NICE START!UPDATE REAL SOON PLEASE!)