Reviews for A Bohemian Life |
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gimmeachancetofly chapter 5 . 2/27/2011 This is awesome! Mark is my absolute favorite RENT character and I love his takes on everyone! |
Latte-The-Cat chapter 5 . 2/16/2011 Hi! This is AWESOME! You totally made my day with Mark's... well, adorkableness. (not that that's a word) Are you planning on doing Angel or Joanne too? Byebye, ~Latte |
darkgemwildcat chapter 5 . 2/13/2011 AWWWWWWW! YAY! THANKS FOR UPDATING! this is realy awesome! |
darkgemwildcat chapter 4 . 2/1/2011 YAY AN UPDATE! YAY! IM HAPPY YOU MADE MY DAY WITH UPDATING YOUR WONDERFUL STORY! please update soon! |
darkgemwildcat chapter 3 . 1/30/2011 holy shit how can this have only 1 review! this is amazing! its realy cool, and greatly written, you put the story in Marks words realy well, its like hes standing behind my computer screen talking to me! please update soon! |
Kill4Karamel chapter 1 . 1/22/2011 I love it! I've never seen rent, but yet I love it. Okay, so I don't think you need to put "downfall" (you'll learn about that later). You could just put his downfall. That would make it run a bit smoother. You can also just say "i am still not sure, whether, in the end, that was a gift of a curse". It's repetitive to say meeting her again. For the second chapter, which I really really liked, I think that you could spread out the description of April throughout the chapter instead of having it just clumped at the beginning. I love Mark's awkwardness.:) For chapter three, I'm a bit confused on how she died. I'm assuming she killed herself? You could definatly expand on that, and expand on his feeling. Death is a powerful thing, you could talk about it for pages, if you wanted. Also, the first sentence seems a bit elementary. Give it a bit more bamf. Overall I think it is a really good story and I think you can fit a lot more writing into each scene. The story makes me want to watch rent. Smiles, Nezzy. |