Reviews for Naruto's Date
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
My god man,you are the greatest perv xD while i dislike explicit fics,this one was well i think ill never look at your sex stories again haha sorry.
Midnight Nightmere chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Very erotic!
LW12 chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
great story
llazo4108822 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I like this fanfic.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
You had to do the same noodle and they end up kissing thing,didn't you?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Wow sooo sweet and cute and romantic! Good job :)
PrincessT123 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
OMG wow

That was really good :)

I love the ending; it was too sweet.

Also, criticism is pretty much my middle name, so bare with me.

You're a great writer, better than most on this site, but sometimes I got lost in the longer sentences because of failure to use commas and or semicolons.

Either, way, awesome job. That was the only thing that bugged me.

awesome sauce ;D
Stella chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
This was...

absolutely...

0
Kyuubi-Sama chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
A great pairing and an awesome and well-written lemon you wrote.
Leaf Ranger chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Oh wow. very nicely done. wouldn't mind seeing a naruTayu lemon.
Screamindivr145 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Great story. I liked that you actually built up to the lemon part. I hate it when a story is just straight sex from the very beginning.
sketchfan chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
my fave couple for all the right reasons
Rockerboy32 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Very good story and plot, i did not notice the stuff the rest of the reviewers complained about, i loved it, you are now on my (incredibly small ) favorite authors list.
undeaddade chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Perfect character capture. 10* **********
infiniteternity chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I'm not adverse to reading lemon and I think you wrote this very well (your first try? really? that's really good then lol) but I think it exceeds the boundaries of an M-rating... at least for this site. It's pretty good though. Keep writing more!
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