|Reviews for Naruto's Date|
| llazo4108822 chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I like this fanfic.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
You had to do the same noodle and they end up kissing thing,didn't you?
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
Wow sooo sweet and cute and romantic! Good job :)
| PrincessT123 chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
That was really good :)
I love the ending; it was too sweet.
Also, criticism is pretty much my middle name, so bare with me.
You're a great writer, better than most on this site, but sometimes I got lost in the longer sentences because of failure to use commas and or semicolons.
Either, way, awesome job. That was the only thing that bugged me.
awesome sauce ;D
| Stella chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
| Kyuubi-Sama chapter 1 . 7/24/2011
A great pairing and an awesome and well-written lemon you wrote.
| Leaf Ranger chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
Oh wow. very nicely done. wouldn't mind seeing a naruTayu lemon.
| Screamindivr145 chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Great story. I liked that you actually built up to the lemon part. I hate it when a story is just straight sex from the very beginning.
| sketchfan chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
my fave couple for all the right reasons
| Rockerboy32 chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
Very good story and plot, i did not notice the stuff the rest of the reviewers complained about, i loved it, you are now on my (incredibly small ) favorite authors list.
| undeaddade chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Perfect character capture. 10* **********
| infiniteternity chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I'm not adverse to reading lemon and I think you wrote this very well (your first try? really? that's really good then lol) but I think it exceeds the boundaries of an M-rating... at least for this site. It's pretty good though. Keep writing more!
| chrisgetsu45 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
bro u never disappoint me when it comes to lemons
i gotta say out of all of em
this is my top fave
| Kat chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I'm pretty sure that only guys have "creamy white fluid" come out when they cum
| NaruHinaFanboy chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Great lemon as usual Raptorcloak, u started 2011 with a bang my friend. I'm looking forward as usual to your next lemon fics as well as the children fics of Naruto and Bleach.