|Reviews for First Edition|
| LunaDewdrop chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
hot very hot
| Anon chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
U should do a sequel or more chapters please
| melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
GREAT, TERRIFIC story, truly wonderful but I have to say WHAT a Sunday here in my little corner of the world. *Electronics trying to drive me crazy, our dryer blew up, snow plow packed snow in front of the paper box so we didn't get a paper and just on and on it goes*
Your story was truly wonderful, a welcome respite from this day I promise you. Thanks so much.
Melissa who is considering crawling back in bed and pulling the covers over her head.
| ExplosiveRanga95 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Squee! More NIkola and Helen Smut! :D Loved it! I could actually imagine Nikola stealing those things from Helen (and John).
Great work, once again!
| J.Stone chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Hot Damn I am loving these.