Reviews for First Edition
Randomsounds chapter 1 . 8/30/2014
hot very hot
Anon chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
U should do a sequel or more chapters please
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Hey there,

GREAT, TERRIFIC story, truly wonderful but I have to say WHAT a Sunday here in my little corner of the world. *Electronics trying to drive me crazy, our dryer blew up, snow plow packed snow in front of the paper box so we didn't get a paper and just on and on it goes*

Your story was truly wonderful, a welcome respite from this day I promise you. Thanks so much.


Melissa who is considering crawling back in bed and pulling the covers over her head.
Mrs Marcus Volturi chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Squee! More NIkola and Helen Smut! :D Loved it! I could actually imagine Nikola stealing those things from Helen (and John).

Great work, once again!
J.Stone chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
Hot Damn I am loving these.