Reviews for A Merman's Song
Sonata7209 chapter 4 . 1/31/2011
lol "manhood" this chapter made me giggle
Sakagami Hina chapter 4 . 1/30/2011
Well, I would probably react differently... but hey. You know me. 0:3

I still love you, Luka HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
Luvandia chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
Guess what? A review I wrote inspired a piece of art D

art/Tako-Luka-and-Merman-lineart-195282043

Thank the person who drew it

Anyway.. this reaction sure was funny! I seriously though he was lying on his stomach... I probably didn't read clearly enough. XD
Winter's Blue Rose chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
Nice innuendos. I can't wait to see how this story turns out! Or how "Squid Girl" reacts to the nakedness. XD
Kishes chapter 3 . 1/27/2011
oh hahaha, there's always a downside for merfolk to form legs XD Overall, I liked this and I expect a great bond between Luka and Gakupo - Please continue
Sonata chapter 3 . 1/26/2011
lol "something else." This is a good story id love to read more.
Luvandia chapter 3 . 1/26/2011
OMG the ending had me fall off my chair!

'A pair of legs and… something else.' I was laughing here when I realised what that something else was!
Sakagami Hina chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
Ufufufufu. I rather do enjoy this. WRIITEEEEEE 8D
ThatLazyOne chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
Hahaha, at the end of this chapter was hilarious. Oh and I love your story so far! Keep up the great work! xD
darisu-chan chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
I gotta sya it keep getting better and better! Want the next chapter already!
Kishes chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
The vocabulary you use is quite extensive. I've always loved the Little Mermaid and it's great to see a fantasy fic for this pairing. Keep up the wonderful work!
Luvandia chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
My friend loves Teto. I do see why, but this was still fun to read, even though my friend discriminates against the sea witch being teto. XD

So.. I really thought that the sea witch would be... TAKO LUKA :D

And I was wrong :P

Hm...I wonder what the Little Mermaid song sounds like. I shall go watch it D
Sakagami Hina chapter 2 . 1/23/2011
Hmmm. Have I mentioned that I love you?

I can't wait for the rest of the story. Seriously, you need to write it, now. Ahh, and the next part would be the awkward bit YAY.
darisu-chan chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Wow! This is so original and certainly captivated me! Going to my favs!
Akari Izume chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
guess what? it didnt suck xD

what a cute little story! :3 im not much of a GakupoxLuka fan but I really enjoyed your story! :D

Akari Izume
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