Reviews for Suffocation
Vickerooni chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
This is incredible. I love the tense that you use throughout the piece; somehow it makes it even more horrific. Your writing style make me envious, too. I wish I could write horror like this. I'm not sure what Sakura is supposed to be at the end, but I feel it doesn't matter; she's a monster, she's not herself, and that's all that matters.

Thank you for posting this on . You've inspired me to write my own horror stories. (:
JustALittleTwisted chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Wow that was amazingly messed up! I loved it!
Amethyst Skulkyrie Cain chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Awwh... your descriptions are awesome ;)
AB chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
You write horror extremely well. This was quite disturbing to read.
RosRua chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Incredibly chilling. I liked the transfer back and forth between the nightmare worlds of Kakashi and Sakura as they were both dying in their own ways.
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
What a chiller, Killaurey. Direct from the realm of nightmares . . . :O

Well-written.