Reviews for Just Pretend
JustGrace13 chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
So sad :( This was really really good though. It's a tough idea to tackle, and you did awesome.
Junichiblue chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
That was really really great. I love your style of writing. Your thoughts flow so well. And it certainly was sad. You could feel the breaking inside Ishida at Ichigo's name. My favorite line, I think, was...

"Her name feels like a song, like a prayer, rich and sweet, sacred."

That was very poetic and beautiful description. Great job all the way.
El3v3n chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
This absolutely broke my heart in such a short bundle of descriptive text...:(. Poor Ishida! *cries and cries*
crono chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Normally i dont real uryu/hime fics,

not more of a Ulquihime & lil of ichihime.

this is cruel and sad, which i love! This sounds

like something Uryu would do! so in character!

But why did things led to this? i wan to know

what happened?
koro una chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
I haven't even read the story yet but isn't this the setting from Junjou Romantica!
Honeyee chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
This was a very sad fic. Poor Ishida! (
qq chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
wow this story was delicately written, and very much in character. wonderful
Neurotic Writer chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
D: OH, Poor Uryuu! WOnderful piece, though!
HodginsMontenegro chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
That was beautiful and heart breaking. A plus work. ;;
theAkuRokuFaNaTiC chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
this is slightly reminiscient of Junjou Romantica. In a good way, of course!
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Great writing. It was very honest and very sensual. You write well! It hurt me too to think that she still wanted ichigo... But he is different and he is so much better. Great job!
Pchan712 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011

That was so emotional! Orihime should just hook up with him for real!
Selphiebunny chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
Holy crap, this was seriously amazing. I can't even describe how beautiful it was. Ishida was so in character, I could almost see everything happening. I felt bad for him, in a way. But then like he said, he did it to himself.

But wow, this was great. And you accomplished a lot of characterization for the fics length. So I loved it!
rubyxblade chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
Oh, god! This was depressing. Poor Ishida. Good shoert story, though. :)
apolakay54 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
It was tragic for Ishida and stupidity for Orihime overall it was a great story.
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