|Reviews for What he left behind|
| Stephany chapter 4 . 1/16
Yes I'm glad you made the volturi nice for a change including jane and I liked that bella had twins
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/7
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/7/2013
I love that they got back together.
| lillian johnson chapter 18 . 4/12/2013
The story, every chapter , was very entertaining. However on the down side , Your grammar and spelling sucks!
| twilightwoods27 chapter 18 . 3/3/2013
Loved it! The ending was well planned and sweet ;)
| Niamh chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
Omg I love it please write more
| Natalie chapter 18 . 11/17/2012
Hi can you please finish this story or update it as its really good and i want to find out what happens next please?
| IzzyPure chapter 18 . 10/20/2012
Yeah, I hate lemons. Bleah. Just making out is cool...I've always wondered, when you kiss, where does your noses go? I know in Twilight they like, bend them in half and kiss, but I'm talking real life here because I'm sure kissing a vampire is diffrent then a human.
You could have Alice gush, complement, laugh, yell, say, giggle, beg (Alice: Please wear the dress!), and...uh...And I think the Nonya thing goes like this:
Jasper: Alice, you feel angry and annoyed! Why?
Alice: AGH I HATE HER!
Jasper: Who my love?
Alice: I HATE NONYA!
Jasper: Nonya? Who's Nonya?
Alice: NONYA BUISNESS!
Jasper: Ohhh HAHA
Alice: DON'T LAUGH AT ME JASPER, SHE'S AWFUL!
Nonya: Alice! I wanted to say I am sorry. You are pregnant with our son, he needs both of his mothers! And...who's this?
Alice: That's Jasper. He is the possible father of my child.
Nonya: NO! You CHEATED on me!
Alice: I am so sorry, I was heartbroken when you cheated on me with Edward!
Bella: WHAT? *runs into room* EDWARD!
Edward: Yes my lo- Nonya?
Nonya: YOU SAID I WAS YOUR LOVE!
Bella: I thought we had something special Edward.
*Nonya and Bella sob hugging each other, they are vampires so no tears*
Emmett *walks in*: Hey! Rose is out hunting and-what's the prob?
Nonya *gasps*: You! You used chocolate and sprinkles! You were with Jasper!
Alice: Jasper! How could you? I was with Nonya but...Emmett? I would have thought you would go for Jacob!
Nonya: Alice, can you forgive me?
Alice: It is okay, Nonya! I forgive you! Let's all run of together!
Bella: Yes, I can not stand one more second looking into his cheaterous eyes!
Alice: Whole heartingly!
*Alice and Nonya run off together*
Jasper: O.o ...Alice?...
Edward: What the Voltori happened?
Hmm, just read that. I have a weird mind...
| IzzyPure chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
| DracoDreams-2 chapter 18 . 3/14/2012
Keep up the good work Can't wait for an update glad to see Seth imprinted
| Maxi Fallon chapter 18 . 9/26/2011
Hey just found your story and I love it! Please update on it soon so I can read more!
| TeamVampires chapter 11 . 8/30/2011
Oh great the mutts just had to appear! It was going so great until this. I hope and I mean drop-down-to-my-knees hope that jacob does NOT imprint on any of the girls. In fact no wolf cuz I hate that. I think tht would be my breaking point. Sorry that's just how I am. I ne'er liked that part of the BD. Well guess I see…
| TeamVampires chapter 10 . 8/30/2011
HE's actually back. Wonder where he was and why he had that certain company. He scared the wittle girls along withe the other women. Girls are gonna have to hunt now no more human blood.
| TeamVampires chapter 9 . 8/29/2011
Oh wow I stil can't believe how nice the Volturi are. But I love it too. And glad te twins are getting along with the family as well. The bonding time was cute and sweet loved it.
| TeamVampires chapter 8 . 8/29/2011
At the house finally. Bonding time seems like fun. And love how they all accepted them of course and how the twins act. They are to adorable!