Reviews for The Good Wife
Illuminated chapter 43 . 5/17
Don’t feel bad about it taking nine years to finish, feel good about finishing it even if it took nine years. Thanks for a very enjoyable binge read! Good luck with your medical career!
Illuminated chapter 29 . 5/16
How could there be toy planes in the ninja world? Unless they are carpenter’s planes?
Guest chapter 43 . 5/13
So good! Thank you for creating this story!
Alfiemooon chapter 43 . 5/12
Great fix, although a plotwhole I couldn't help but notice was the bad version of evil from astra's dimension. Why did she apologize just before her death? That made it seem like she didn't really hate astra, although her actions says otherwise.
Lonty Arbalest chapter 43 . 3/20
Good Story
animewhatif27 chapter 1 . 3/14
very good job on kill trash
Marcefriasu chapter 43 . 3/2
This was beautifully written. Thank you
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
Just came back to reread this great story
Quazillionaire chapter 43 . 2/6
Just re-read this! It's honestly wild that it has been very nearly a full decade since I first laid eyes on this story... At this point reading it is a nostalgic experience. :P You have a lovely grasp of dialogue, your portrayals of all the varied characters feel natural and authentic.

I hope you are doing well, and have a great 2023!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2022
As much as this story is entertaining for the Ino shippers, it’s not fair to trash hinata by saying she didn’t understand Naruto. Ino was fan girl till the end, she would never give Naruto the time of day. Even now in Boruto, Ino screeches when she sees Sasuke infront of his daughter.
reynanuy chapter 43 . 11/21/2022
Great story. I loved reading it, even if it was a bit slow at times and the ending a bit rushed. I kept expecting something like 16 Ino being the evil Ino via time jump or something like that. I am glad that was not the case though. Thanks for sharing such a great fic with us.
Adinda Carmilla chapter 43 . 10/12/2022
Thank you for the great story you made
elkenn chapter 43 . 9/29/2022
That was very good! I'm so glad I found this fanfic! Thanks for the great work author! I wish there was another chapter showing the younger version's future though...

Anyway, once again, thanks for the great work!
mephy chapter 43 . 9/17/2022
fun and wholesome but the warlike dimension is properly fucked...
its missing a part of itself so its a toss up whether astra just disappeared or ripped a hole into time and space.
C0v3W01f chapter 43 . 9/11/2022
Ive been on a Naruino kick for the last few weeks after finally having finished Shippuden and discovering the massive amount of fan fiction.

Like you said, having writing that came from very different ages makes a LOT more sense now that I know (having read this in 2022).

Having said that, thank you. This was perhaps the most wholesome depiction of Naruino that I've been able to find, and I've looked a lot. You did a wonderful job balancing the story between the two perspectives and juggled the intricacies of their ages well.

A part of me wishes that Naruino was the cannon ship, because I always felt like Hinata wasn't mentally or emotionally connected to Naruto... Much like you depict here.

Thank you for the time and effort you put into this. If you ever decide to continue this or other similar stories I would love to read and review them with you.

P.s. You dont have to go back and edit your early chapters, but it may help some readers get through to your conclusion.
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