I rarely leave reviews that are more in depth than just saying I enjoyed the read, but this one deserves an actual review. Really interesting concept and really well explored. It was really interesting to see the different pairings and their interactions. Wasn’t expecting the HinataxNeji though I’ll be honest.
Only really noticed two errors, first one is tiny. In the last couple chapters you have Kankuro tell Ino about Konoha being destroyed and then a couple chapters later Temari comes and says the same thing. The second is a bit bigger. You reveal that Ino had been working on her technique the night before the switch, and she and Naruto argued about it that morning. But then when later that day she’s switched minds with a version of herself from another dimension he doesn’t immediately think of that? It takes several chapters and him seeing the book in his desk to remind him. When I was reading the beginning I assumed the technique had been developed at least a few years prior and that’s why it wasn’t immediately obvious.
Overall really good story though.

These aren’t flaws, just two suggestions about things I think could’ve improved the story.
-Introduce Shimura earlier
-Introduce more OC’s as potential villains

Shimura being the sort of main villain but not being introduced until much later in the story weakens the character a bit. Even if it’s just a couple mentions or interactions it would help to establish the character earlier.

It was a bit obvious that Astra had to be a villain due to no other new characters had been introduced that weren’t married to, or the children of, one of the Naruto characters. Having a couple others would leave room for speculation about possible villains.

Loved the story though, really good throughout! Thank you :)

HAHAHA THE RAMEN SHE EATS IN HER 16 YEARS OLD PAST ALSO GET ISEKAI'D TO HER FUTURE SELF'S STOMACHXD.
though... i don't want to imagine the smell of ~16years old ramen being vomited from my mouth...

don't you hate it when you just want to eat some ramen but that ramen is actually a time travel device.

What a chapter, what a fic! I can't describe how amazing a journey this was. I couldn't stop reading from start to finish. Well done. Definitely one of my favorites of all time.

Yes yes I was right! It’s so sad but still NejiHina ftw! *cries happy tears*

Omg I love the older Hinata!

Is her husband Neji? It makes sense she might have been forced into the marraige since she had child at an early age. Omg omg I love NejiHina so I really hope they found love!

Naruto named his daughter after the primordial deity of Narutoverse who is the progenitor of chakra?

Thank you writer

Although Hinata and Neji are cousins, their fathers are biological twins making Hinata and Neji biological siblings. I hope that the shinobi world has a way to deal with genetic deformalities, otherwise RIP Masahiro.

smh dis 16 y/old ino is uh idk i mean instead of prioritizing her current problem (like how to go back on her original body and gather information about the older ino so that when she met another friend of older ino she wont look suspicious) she just bother herself to help another person that has nothing todo with her current problem.
im out but still thankyou for 20 chapter
excuse my grammar

wtf ino saying? did she just propose that without talking to naruto?

"I can sympathise with you" thats hurt Ino thats hurt

i likes dis story bcs sakura is dead

This story was very good. Im very happy I found it. Ion know if you still write fanfic but I wish you well in all your future endeavors.

I just finished reading this story, great job. I look forward to reading some of your other stories.