Honest Lunar Raven chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
okay.. i just laughed so hard i think i broke a rib.

oddly i could easily see this happening.. good characterization.
Juno chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
I honestly didn't expect this. I was sure it was "The Birds and the Bees" XD .


* A baseball bat $60

* A machete $ 93

* Fate and Nanoha's reactions Priceless
Puidwen chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Cyberchao X chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Poor Nanoha...though it's painfully obvious that the answer to Einhart's question is "no".
ninryu chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
Lol, being straight is unnatural. XD

That was a good one. Gotta love Vivio's reaction.
OZ7UP chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I had a few laughs out of this. On a more serious note, though, this story pretty much highlights the reason why I have lost all respect for the NanoFate community. While I'm all for equal rights, and a good shoujo-ai story can touch my heart if delivered properly, the NanoFate community is needlessly and unnecessarily brutal with its overall treatment of Yuuno, or any male character (canon or original) who can even be remotely linked romantically to Nanoha and/or Fate, for that matter.
shanejayell chapter 1 . 1/23/2011

Very cute!
Biigoh chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Oh Vivio... never change _
dylanredefined chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Well it made me laugh thankyou
Ryuus2 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
...yeeeahhh... This is definitely NOT how I saw this scene play out in my own head. Though now I want to see the follow up conversation with Vivio's group at school, while being spied on by the older girls from Strikers. But that's just me ;)

Keep up the great work!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Well, well, soldier...




This was pure gold.


Even if Nanoha dated the ferret. o_O EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!


I hope Fate goes easy on Einhart. ROFLOL

Nice work!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Endymion2314 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
So...looks like Fate is going to give Einhart the shovel speech. I'm thinking Fate would give the speech first then blast her. Nanoha would blast her first then a few days later when she woke up in the ICU she'd give the speech.
Tikigod784 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I think the general consensus of the Nanoha community is to like the first two series more than Post-StrikerS... even if 19-year-old NanoFate is full of win.
Lance58 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
DUN DUN DUN DONNNNNNNNNNNNNNN... Your dead meat eihart! LOL run! luckly fate is the one who is going tooo reprimand you haha she has a bit of mercy in her side... :D anyway write more... lol looking down on straight people...
Lily Testarossa chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Poor Ein-chan she is going to have a hard time with Fate P
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