Reviews for Sage of Justice
Lynze chapter 4 . 5/16
PLEASE MAKE YOUR PARAGRAPHS A BIT SHORTER. The long paragraphs are a turn-off (sorry off the lack of a better phrase) to the reader.
Thanks
Jose19 chapter 2 . 3/1
The Superhero name for Naruto should be something that is tied down to his legacy from his Clan or the relationship with his father in my opinion.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 2/11
I always been interested in such a crossover because the characters of Dc are all so interesting, and I am fascinated by the pairing as well.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
supert history
Guest chapter 4 . 3/23/2014
supert history
jhasd12 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
In "One was blond and had a red eye with black tomoe's..." do you mean eyes? The description is kinda unclear. if Naruto got the Sharingan who did he get it from? Itachi, Sasuke, Shisui (one of Itachi's crows) or is it Kakashi? I'm kinda confused. But other than that pretty good.
Slytherin Studios chapter 4 . 5/26/2012
I like your story, please update soon.
munesanzune chapter 4 . 2/24/2012
I agrees with Jinsokuichi. There is one more thing; this story is main point of a story is to captivate readers. It feels as if I am reading a report/history book.
Jinsokuichi chapter 4 . 2/20/2012
First note, this is not a flame as i hate people who do. This is just my honest opinion of which you can ignore or take heed to to improve this fic. You make too many text walls. Try to spread out those massive paragraphs a little more since no one wants to read a 10 line paragraph. Dont put speeches from different persons in te same sentence and paragraph. It is confusing and you can lose track of who is saying what and honestly, it just makes the whole thing seem rushed. It will also help you stop forgetting to end your quotations and organise your thoughts better because to me, this entire 4 chapters seemed far too rushed.
Raven Marcus chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
Interesting !
Viet Devil chapter 4 . 12/19/2011
really do hope you decide to update this story again! :)
Dragunav chapter 4 . 8/1/2011
you leave alot of the dialog out and it seems that you are rushing the plot. Besides that the story is good.
Ryker Lord of Shadows chapter 4 . 5/25/2011
cool
Cronocity chapter 2 . 3/31/2011
Ever heard of police academy?
mfmxxx chapter 4 . 3/23/2011
No reaction about a dead Naruto mysteriously coming back?

It's too rushed.
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