Reviews for Freezing: Hearts of Ice
Guest chapter 43 . 5/19/2015
Great point of view from a different perspective but the ending was disappointed. I would have still let him end up with Satelizer and let him leave Elizabeth but by letting him cut out the stgmata of Elizabeth on his own. En then implant Satelizer's stigmata after he walked back to her dorm bleeding from his open wound. To top the cake I would let Andre pop out of somewhere, like it was also part of Elizabeth's hidden agenda. Lol but it was interesting can't wait for the origan Freezing ending.
IansInsane chapter 36 . 5/17/2015
But there will be retributions...
IansInsane chapter 27 . 5/17/2015
Wow... Really?
IansInsane chapter 20 . 5/17/2015
The story about Stella's brother made me crack up!
IansInsane chapter 9 . 5/17/2015
All that really needs to be said...
Nemoskull chapter 43 . 5/14/2015
well that sucked. i kinda hate this.
Guest chapter 43 . 5/11/2015
Read your story. Verdict. Sheer crap and dissapointment. You suck.
KingPlotBunny chapter 20 . 4/10/2015
AHAHAHAH oh my god that last one was hilarious I'm surprised when Louis was listing the things he did to her Satellizer didn't just say "you know what I forgot about the dog food incident I take it back" and just hit him
correnhimself316 chapter 43 . 3/29/2015
Oh boy...if this is ever continued, I imagine the Bali chapters are going to totally be different without Kazuya there . Oh the tangled webs you have woven LoTLoF. The drama and romance of this story so far are excellent, and the inclusion of Kazuya's dad as a living character makes this whole plot all the more thing though, Elizabeth really isn't as cold and manipulative as you have painted her to be here, she is actually quite kind amd caring, as seen when she was willing to being a Pandora, to be with her Limiter Andre because he ended up going blind as a result of to saving her from a can be a bit of a nincompoop at times in cannon, and I feel that you really captured that in this story, the whole mess with the Baptism with Elizabeth, the love affair with Stella while partnered with Queeny, and finally the drunken sex with Elizabeth, ugh Kazu I know you are a human and capable of mistakes, but goodness dude! And there is still the unresolved situation with Rana and Annette! Might as well make it a harem at this rate, yikes.
Aeona316 chapter 43 . 3/25/2015
Great story, I'll give you that much. Right up till the last couple chapters, even then they were great...I just absolutely hated them from a certain view. Elizabeth is a complete and utter bitch. It's people that like her that make honorable people do unhonest things. I actually got so upset with her I punched a hole in my door frame...who knew those were solid wood? Any way, like I said, great story I just don't agree with the ending.
Guest chapter 43 . 3/22/2015
So that's how it ends
Guest chapter 43 . 3/22/2015
Do that's how it ends
Jeremiah Bull chapter 43 . 3/10/2015
You've had Stella tell our MC all about her rape and her family situation.

Then she tells him again ten chapters later like she hasn't told him and he acts surprised.

He acts like he doesn't know why she reacts the way she does when people touch her, WHEN SHE ALREADY TOLD HIM.

You gave your MC serious BAMF military capabilities and the mindset of a meek, indecisive child when it comes to anything else. It's completely incongruous. In fact, he's so stupid and easily manipulated in another story I could easily see him as the witless antagonistic force. He can face a giant monster but not slap a bitch that needs to be bitch slapped?

With some minor adjustments this could be a decent story. But I don't really expect you to make it a better story, considering how long it's been abandoned, how much work it would take, and with how busy you are with writing that will actually get you some money.

Good luck with Waldo Rabbit. And sorry about the harsh review, but I have a hard time holding back the vitriol when it comes to certain story aspects. It's nothing personal.
Guest chapter 43 . 3/5/2015
Can't believe you ended it here if all places
Red Death chapter 43 . 2/17/2015
Waaaay too much whump.
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