Reviews for Tied in Loops
everyday-deeds chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I loved your other story so much that I had to go check out your others, and I really love this style of telling. I can't imagine how hard it must be to pick all these sentences, I don't think I could do it... but I love seeing all the images made by your words. I'll definitely be checking more of these out!
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Good snippets!
anemix chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Your sentences were really interesting hints at other possible stories and situations I liked it, and hope you continue this.

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Terra Young chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Great job!