Reviews for Secrets
Lil' Miss Ravenclaw chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
I absolutely loath LilyScorpius . I had always imagined Scorpius being with Rose for a good reason, and Lily with Lysander for another good reason. But it was an okay story though..
minnie chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
poor Lysander...
kingslayers chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
I prefer LilyLysander to LilyScorpius though! Tbh I loathe lilyscorp.
PrincessDripDrop chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
i like it...but i wish it had a happier ending.
allisonarrgent chapter 1 . 1/27/2011
I don't ship Lily/Lysander either, but I think they're a cute pairing.

This was pretty good for your first time writing Lily/Lysander, and I loved the recurring theme of "Can you keep a secret?" - that gave the story a nice flow and repetition.

I liked how at the end, he had to break his promise because he couldn't handle the torture anymore. However, I loathe Lily/Scorpius with all my heart and would rather have had Lily to end up with /anyone/ else, but I guess you needed a pairing at the end if you didn't want Lily to get her happy ending with Lysander, and Scorpius was convenient enough.
XxXxDreamerxXxX chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
I liked it! I think you did a good job on Lily/Lysander even though you loath it. Well, I like them! I feel sorry for poor Lysander... good job again!
lydiamaartin chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
I think it was wonderful, Mad! LilyLysander is another one of those pairings I think are cute, but I don't ship them, and I do think you wrote them well, especially considering you hate them P I really felt bad for poor Lysander, and I can see why he broke his promise - sometimes, it is the girls who are the clueless ones, huh? ;) Both were characterized wonderfully - Lily as sort of naive and friendly, but oblivious, and Lysander as her protective best friend, secretly falling in love with her.

My only nitpick would be that this sentence: "A radiant expression erupts from her own face." seems a little awkward. How can an expression erupt from someone's face? I kinda pictured light bursting out of her eyes and mouth, which I'm sure is not what you were going for ;) Maybe "Her own face is radiant with joy." might work better?

All in all, though, it was a splendid effort coming from someone who doesn't like the pairing ) Fantastic job, and keep writing!
renzhie chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
how awesome my prompt is! *oops* wrong sentence, zhie. -shakeshead-

Anyway Mad, this was absolutely brilliant.

LilyScorpius FTW. Have I mentioned that I love that you keep hinting them?

I feel bad for Lysander though, so I will: *insert Molly*, there...he will be okay, soon. ;)
cute chapter 1 . 1/24/2011
LilyScorpius FTW! I'm not the biggest fan of LilyLysander, but you made me like them if just for this one story.
this-girl-with-glasses chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
You didn't do a horrible job! In my opinion you did a wonderful job :) I liked how each year the secrets got a little more personal for Lily and little more painful for Lysander(well maybe not the pain ful part) Great Job :)
Tani Smiles chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I absolutely adored this story! This is actually the first Lily/Lysander I've read and I think you did an amazing job with it. I really liked how Lily always began with 'Can you keep a secret?" and I especially loved the last two lines. Great job! I'm off to go check out your other fics!