|Reviews for Landstradd's First Chapters|
| Corwyn chapter 3 . 3/14
I'm glad to see the other story of yours that I was about to read, seems to be this one continued. So I skipped reading the snippet and am running over to that story now. Thanks again for all your stories.
| Corwyn chapter 2 . 3/14
I disagree. I would read the heck out of a story with this beginning. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| Corwyn chapter 1 . 3/14
Loved this snippet, and hope you someday continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
| Rabunga chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Definitely not the poor child! I really like the unique "grandparent" hook...once again great idea, would love to see more!
| Rabunga chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
I love LOVE this so far and wish you would turn it into a fully chaptered story, but then I am still hoping you are going to come back to the power of the mind :)
| healingcat chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I truly enjoy your writing and would love to see this plot bunny grow into a full story.
| gaschalk chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I know that you have stopped writing and that is a shame. But I would still like to see "The White Mage of Time written and completed. Chapter 3 of this group of stories only needs two or three more chapters to complete.
| Tigris DivingHawk chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Good Story I wonder if you are going to continue it
| Koroby chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
This could end up becoming a fun game of "Who can come up with the best title for Harry?"
| keichan2 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
I liked all three ideas!
They all had never seen before (at least, not by me ;-p) ideas.
I really have no preference about which one you should concentrate on first (and as I'm a bit late, you already have chosen, though haven't updated for some time) and I would really like to read more of the three of them.
| johnapple chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
You write an excellent story - you tell a good story; but I don't think English is your first language. "An" is an object of "one : e.g. I stepped on an ant. It is not the same as : "and" often used in the completion of a long sentence. I am also not that great on English grammar, but your writing is good enough that I can look over and clarify the grammatical mistakes in my mind as I read.
I hope you continue to write your stories as I am sure I will continue to read you for your time and effort.
| Keedra2173 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I do hope you continue this one day. It's a lot of fun.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Maintaning the status quo is a awesome story. I would love it if you continued that one.
| Silverdragonstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Please pursue this first plot bunny! It kicks butt. Almost made me late for work this morning as I tend to read FF at breakfast. ( Great way to wake up.) I was that into it.
| dragonlordrb chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
Ok. Passable But what happened to Isis? Also explains Ginny.