|Reviews for Landstradd's First Chapters|
| gaschalk chapter 1 . 1/20
I know that you have stopped writing and that is a shame. But I would still like to see "The White Mage of Time written and completed. Chapter 3 of this group of stories only needs two or three more chapters to complete.
| DracoDreams-2 chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Good Story I wonder if you are going to continue it
| Koroby chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
This could end up becoming a fun game of "Who can come up with the best title for Harry?"
| keichan2 chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
I liked all three ideas!
They all had never seen before (at least, not by me ;-p) ideas.
I really have no preference about which one you should concentrate on first (and as I'm a bit late, you already have chosen, though haven't updated for some time) and I would really like to read more of the three of them.
| johnapple chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
You write an excellent story - you tell a good story; but I don't think English is your first language. "An" is an object of "one : e.g. I stepped on an ant. It is not the same as : "and" often used in the completion of a long sentence. I am also not that great on English grammar, but your writing is good enough that I can look over and clarify the grammatical mistakes in my mind as I read.
I hope you continue to write your stories as I am sure I will continue to read you for your time and effort.
| Keedra2173 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I do hope you continue this one day. It's a lot of fun.
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2012
Maintaning the status quo is a awesome story. I would love it if you continued that one.
| Silverdragonstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Please pursue this first plot bunny! It kicks butt. Almost made me late for work this morning as I tend to read FF at breakfast. ( Great way to wake up.) I was that into it.
| dragonlordrb chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
Ok. Passable But what happened to Isis? Also explains Ginny.
| dragonlordrb chapter 2 . 11/23/2012
possibility's here, would be worth the reading.
| dragonlordrb chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
FANTASTIC! Would love to see this expanded upon and given life!
| zeropolis79 chapter 3 . 11/20/2012
Great chapter and ideas.
| zeropolis79 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
Good take on the time travel idea.
| Toby860 chapter 3 . 11/17/2012
oh man. this is by far your best start and i hope that you will take the time to make this story full legenth. do you have any plans to continue and make this perticular story a feature. i have some questions involving it. do you plan to touch upon the tomb raider movies. i as cause i can see harry's knowledge helpong out laura on the quests. please consider this. also what is your plan for the triwizard tournament. anyways good luck if you try for this story.
| Toby860 chapter 2 . 11/17/2012
i must say that this is a good start. personally i think that you should try and continue this story.