|Reviews for A Day In The Life|
| Inkfire chapter 2 . 2/20/2011
I loved this... I loved how you handled doing the whole day: the way you chose to would have seemed pretty boring, but you made a great job out of it and each moment really showed great insight and made it painfully clear, how awful his life really is... Although he doesn't quite realize how abnormal it is! I loved how you put Daphne in the middle of this, it was really cute. Great work!
PS: this was Ellie writing, right? It always makes me smile, because your AN is SO recognizable
| Inkfire chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This was incredible. I love how you expressed little Alicia's feelings - the kid talk was very well done, and yet it was so moving and so heart-breaking. I liked how you used the italics for their speech too, it looked real good. Great job!