Reviews for Unexpected
VAND1TA chapter 60 . 6/4/2023
The ending was not satisfactory, but i hope the sequel will quench your thirst.
VAND1TA chapter 59 . 6/4/2023
this was a nice jump in the future showing a small glimpse of Kim and Shego's life, but it didn't give much about there lives together, or the struggles they had to face.
and it was so predictable that the twins would fix the machine.
VAND1TA chapter 58 . 6/4/2023
I like the little but juicy Kim x Shego scene.
VAND1TA chapter 57 . 6/3/2023
Jim and Tim are good brothers for taking revenge for Kim,
And i wonder if the police will believe there story.

that dream sequence of Shego was interesting and such a beautiful end of the chapter
VAND1TA chapter 56 . 6/3/2023
another excellent chapter!
i like the fact Kim didn't kill Hego, but instead used the ray device to remove his powers.

and this chapter paralleled when Kim got shot and Shego needed to save and bring Kim to the hospital

And i also like the way the story is written, describing everything Shego is seeing and feeling, that makes it very immersive.

Kudos on another great chapter.
VAND1TA chapter 55 . 6/3/2023
Hector is such a evil, evil mean as hell character.
i hate the way he tortures people, but i see why he does it.
Ron was very useful on this mission, that was great, none of his goofyness, i was expecting Shego to thank me for saving her life
Very touching moment when Shego and Marvin had a moment together.

Hector went down really fast, without any proper fight.
VAND1TA chapter 54 . 6/3/2023
Oh damn, Kenny died? and that South park joke though..
it was a hilarious way to defeat Betty, will played.

It really hurts seeing your loved one in pain, when you are unable to do anything.
You wrote a stunning chapter here
VAND1TA chapter 53 . 6/3/2023
Okay Kenny is a jerk, i thought he was cool but not that Shego lost her powers, he acts all cold towards her...
it was so sad seeing Kim not recognising Shego, this is a awful situation.
this was a great chapter to read.
VAND1TA chapter 52 . 6/3/2023
This chapter was so damn EXCITING!

Ron's monkey powers came back! Shego lost her powers and Kim is now on the scene!
so much happened, good stuff here!
Kenny had patience , after seeing what has happened, glad Hego is one of those dumb villains that leaves the prisoner alone.
VAND1TA chapter 51 . 6/2/2023
Wowow! i didn't expect this to happen.
Jim, Tim and Ron run right into Betty and got captured!
then Shego met Hector and that ending was shocking!
what is Kenny gonna do now?
VAND1TA chapter 50 . 6/1/2023
Why didn't Shego tell about Marvin and his twins, that they were on there side earlier?

That was good idea to have Ron, Jim and Tim together they find Betty, which might be a easy fight for them and Shego with Kenny would have a equal match Vs Hector, if he is the one they find ..
What a relief Marvin found those twins and Ron before the enemy did.
Good thing Kenny isn't flirting with Shego, but Kim is probably listening in on all there actions through the earpiece.

that ending cliffhanger was good
VAND1TA chapter 49 . 6/1/2023
I'm kinda worried if they are combat ready, but the plan has to move on.

Goodbyes are always sad, it's too bad Kim couldn't join the mission , but she got a sweet kiss from Shego though .
I like that Shego and Ron had that conversation, and that he is ready to repay his debt.
VAND1TA chapter 48 . 5/31/2023
Oh damn! that was intense, luckily Shego got there in time!
Ron actually did something good this time, and bless Wade for his hacking skills!
VAND1TA chapter 47 . 5/31/2023
it's always fun to read the interactions between Shego and the other characters.
And it was a fun moment yet again when Anne walked in of Kim and Shego.

now we know who Kenny was calling, very weird it's one of the Wego's.
and who is this Cindy what will she do?
Very exciting stuff to find out
VAND1TA chapter 46 . 5/31/2023
it sure was funny how the twins tested the gadgets Wade made.
and that scene with Kim and Shego was so lovely and cute, and Anne seeing them together was also a good moment.
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