Whoa! I never imagined Betty 'ever' being evil and try to take over the world. LOVE your twists in the characters! Story is amazing!

This situation is a Real Live Mess like Grandma used to make. And I don't see much of a way out of it.

Hopefully you do.

I enjoyed this very much, even though I think you should have had Vctor and Betty killed I am sure you have your reasons I found your oc characters to blend in rather well something that is rarely seen I assure you. You can expect me to read more of your works and review accordingly from here on out it is rare you know? Finding a gem of a story on this site anymore. So I appreciate this greatly you have my thanks.

great story

Yes. Whoo took me the hole day to read this. And im glad I did it was an very interesting story and I loved every bit of it. Totally epic XD awesome story

Excellent story. I'm glad I found this. Gonna go read the sequel now. :)

I loved it

zmg i'm squeeing already

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Hi. I really enjoy your story. i read it last year.

Love this story :)

Okay, this is a REALLY LONG STORY (heh ... I'd be something of an expert on that topic) and the action is fast-paced and engaging. That's my excuse for not leaving more reviews, that and the fact that the chapters are short. But this seemed to be a good place to stop and take a breath or two and regroup, mentally.

That Shego went to Kim for help is not only possible, but likely. That Kim would help her ... yeah, pretty much the same. That they would fall into each other's arms so quickly and thoroughly? Hm. Shaky. But I'll give you that one. They HAVE known each other a long time, and the mutual admiration was pretty plain.

But ... Betty Director is Shego's sister? Didn't see that one coming. Or Hego's hatred.

Where this is going with regards to the doomsday devices, I have no clue. But there are 23 more chapters for you to explain things. So as soon as I can (after various necessary home-improvement projects are taken care of) I'll be back. Don't run off.

Yeah I know that now, my silly brain thought he was going to when he said he was afraid to die hahaha, I'm about to start storm, I wish I could've found this sooner so I could read both as they were written but oh well

Wow. He killed Kenny. Really. I was watching South Park while reading this and I laughed so hard I almost passed out due to lack of oxygen and my mom was like dafuq o.O

Aaaaaaaaand Marvin dies. His "fear of dying" gave it away. As soon as I read that I was like f$& really? Hopefully I'm wrong though. I love this story by the way, don't get why anyone wouldn't. Sorry for not reviewing til chapter forty something by the way, just lazy I guess D