Reviews for Unexpected
Guest chapter 22 . 12/23/2017
Fuck. Imagine having hypersensitivity and being on your period. That would be hell.
Remmi chapter 47 . 6/15/2016
Wow even the receptionist. Well I suppose I am glad the William that Kenny talked to wasn't the Du guy, he is called William right? Or was that just Will... *forgot* Begs to question tho why and I still dislike him for what he pulled wih Shego. .
Remmi chapter 44 . 6/15/2016
Man, they could not just get a break can they.
Remmi chapter 43 . 6/15/2016
I guess I am hang up on a confident Kim and not an insecure one. Shego's frailty was more understandable given her situation. I guess I was hoping Kim would remain the stronger of the two. In a way, I love and hate their imperfections.
Remmi chapter 42 . 6/15/2016
1. Shego established before that she only had casual sex. But no. Apparently she had romantic ones as well. 2. Kim shouldn't be hurt by this info because hello, they were not together before. There is nothing to think about except Shego had an ex. I do not recall her saying specifically to Kim that she's the only one ever. Sorry I am once again bothered by inconsistencies or surprised change in plots. But in the end, I am still enjoyin the story. XD
Remmi chapter 41 . 6/15/2016
I most certainly hope he is and finally get it in his thick skull that Kimmie's never gonna go back to him.
Remmi chapter 37 . 6/15/2016
Just a bit miff that there's seem to be some hate agenda against all men involved w the main women. For now, anyway. It bugs me a bit.
Forbidden Blck Roses chapter 60 . 4/11/2016
wow that was awesome. I was in my feelings during the whole story ... (Kim gets shot…*criestwins beat the shit out of Hector and bet…*grins like an idiotas u can tell I'm an emotional babyPanyways nice story loved it keep up the good work
hausofbraus chapter 54 . 7/22/2015
Dat south park reference tho
Guest chapter 4 . 10/22/2014
Masochists like being hurt, sadists like to hurt people... sadomasochists like both. Just pointing it out, because I assume Kim will be tracking him down later. Now on with me reading! :-D
melb623 chapter 35 . 7/27/2014
Whoa! I never imagined Betty 'ever' being evil and try to take over the world. LOVE your twists in the characters! Story is amazing!
Concolor44 chapter 43 . 7/13/2014
This situation is a Real Live Mess like Grandma used to make. And I don't see much of a way out of it.

Hopefully you do.
Bloody Rewrite chapter 60 . 5/3/2014
I enjoyed this very much, even though I think you should have had Vctor and Betty killed I am sure you have your reasons I found your oc characters to blend in rather well something that is rarely seen I assure you. You can expect me to read more of your works and review accordingly from here on out it is rare you know? Finding a gem of a story on this site anymore. So I appreciate this greatly you have my thanks.
Anubis1056 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014
great story
OTAKU YUMIKURI chapter 60 . 2/6/2014
Yes. Whoo took me the hole day to read this. And im glad I did it was an very interesting story and I loved every bit of it. Totally epic XD awesome story
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