Fuck. Imagine having hypersensitivity and being on your period. That would be hell.

Wow even the receptionist. Well I suppose I am glad the William that Kenny talked to wasn't the Du guy, he is called William right? Or was that just Will... *forgot* Begs to question tho why and I still dislike him for what he pulled wih Shego. .

Man, they could not just get a break can they.

I guess I am hang up on a confident Kim and not an insecure one. Shego's frailty was more understandable given her situation. I guess I was hoping Kim would remain the stronger of the two. In a way, I love and hate their imperfections.

1. Shego established before that she only had casual sex. But no. Apparently she had romantic ones as well. 2. Kim shouldn't be hurt by this info because hello, they were not together before. There is nothing to think about except Shego had an ex. I do not recall her saying specifically to Kim that she's the only one ever. Sorry I am once again bothered by inconsistencies or surprised change in plots. But in the end, I am still enjoyin the story. XD

I most certainly hope he is and finally get it in his thick skull that Kimmie's never gonna go back to him.

Just a bit miff that there's seem to be some hate agenda against all men involved w the main women. For now, anyway. It bugs me a bit.

wow that was awesome. I was in my feelings during the whole story ... (Kim gets shot…*criestwins beat the shit out of Hector and bet…*grins like an idiotas u can tell I'm an emotional babyPanyways nice story loved it keep up the good work

Dat south park reference tho

Masochists like being hurt, sadists like to hurt people... sadomasochists like both. Just pointing it out, because I assume Kim will be tracking him down later. Now on with me reading! :-D

Whoa! I never imagined Betty 'ever' being evil and try to take over the world. LOVE your twists in the characters! Story is amazing!

This situation is a Real Live Mess like Grandma used to make. And I don't see much of a way out of it.

Hopefully you do.

I enjoyed this very much, even though I think you should have had Vctor and Betty killed I am sure you have your reasons I found your oc characters to blend in rather well something that is rarely seen I assure you. You can expect me to read more of your works and review accordingly from here on out it is rare you know? Finding a gem of a story on this site anymore. So I appreciate this greatly you have my thanks.

great story

Yes. Whoo took me the hole day to read this. And im glad I did it was an very interesting story and I loved every bit of it. Totally epic XD awesome story