Reviews for Unexpected
Capt31 chapter 8 . 1/27/2011
The pace of this tale is wonderfully in tune with all its elements. More of the trauma Shego had to endure is revealed and growing possessive nature of our favorite red head is hot on the trail as well. Not sure that who ever raped Shego should really worry about her catching up with them...its beginning to look like the true demon might have red hair!

The true name being infused was nicely don, showing that another level of trust had been achieved. It looks like both our ladies are getting an idea about why they are feeling the way they are...and I especially liked that Kim is being the optimistic one to boot. Very sweet likey!
Capt31 chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
Got both of them wondering why they gravitate toward one another...even in their sleep. Shego is understandably sensitive to feelings of being confined, but she doesn't seem to mind fighting those feelings of flight when she realizes its "Kim" doing the retraining.

Also like that dominate side of Kim showing up and wanting to protect and care for Shego. It doesn't look like that picture is clear to Kim yet, but given looks very promising indeed! Well done!
Capt31 chapter 6 . 1/27/2011
One can only imagine how someone so traumatized would be haunted by such images. I think you captured the her emotional state well and how it would even impact someone as strong as Shego.

Kim's presence has the right feel for support and caring. Like how Kim is being that constant for her and calming a tortured soul. Also glad to see Kim trusting her instincts and not backing away. Very well played!
Capt31 chapter 5 . 1/27/2011
Very much enjoying the development here. Shego is still trying to get her arms around her situation and the new relationship level she has now with Kim. Well paced and believable for these two.

Enjoying the ride!
xxDarkAngelBabyxx chapter 8 . 1/27/2011
That was great! Please update asap
lilbit1016 chapter 8 . 1/27/2011
nice chapter I really loved it
Random Peep chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
Poor Shego! Hee Hee I always say whoever is a morning person is weird lol anyways awesome job! Can't wait to see what happens! P
Major Mike Powell III chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!

Now, this was pretty nice.

*O* at KiGo waking up all cuddled up! *O*

And LOL at the Pandaroo. LOL

And LMAO at Shego peeking at Kimmie. LMAO

And nothin' washes your problems away more than a long showa'! O

And now, a nap. Let's see how this one goes. :S

Nice work! Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Redline57 chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
This is a really good story so far! I'm gonna bookmark this and can't wait for the next chapter. Nice writing!
Darkshadow-lord chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
Poor Shego! I hope the bastard that did that to her gets what he deserves!
lilbit1016 chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
this is a very interesting but a very good story
Major Mike Powell III chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.

Ah, the nightmares. They're always mandatory in this kinda fics. That doesn't make it any nicer, though. D:

Who the Hell did this to Shego...?

Well, as she knows his face, then she can help Kimmie avenge her! :D

But for now, sleep is required. And what a better sleep than cuddling with your future girlfriend? ;D

Nice work! Keep it up!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
FFaddict007 chapter 6 . 1/26/2011
Awww! poor Shego I wanna hug her too!

Kim is so good and caring too. Wonder if the identity of the perpetrator shall be revealed as Shego knows the face. Kim might wake up to being slapped around in Shegos sleep but I think she can handle it.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1º review, btches!

Now, this was interesting.

Sure, not a lot happenin' here, but what we got was nice. :3

Things have settled down for the time being, and Shego will soon be on the way to recovery.

Nice work.

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
xx DarkAngelBaby xx chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
Please update asap!
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