Reviews for Unexpected
Capt31 chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
That was a well played scene between these three. Liked the inner dialogue Kim is having and getting mad with the one that violated Shego. I think your doing well with portraying the Shego's struggle with her emotions. Considering how cocky and bold her character is, it is a realistic contrast with the circumstances she finds herself in.

Have to enjoy a Kim that is allowing her warm heart to shine through. Opening her home to Shego and showing a protective strict is very promising to say the least. Appreciating the tale and looking forward to see how you get Shego past this trauma. Hoping that Kim is a big part of that healing to boot! Well done!;)
FFaddict007 chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
Shegos being as brave as she can for a victim, shes not running away and if asked questions tries to answer them as best she can. So cool how Shego said "No" then Kim cut her off, the knight in charming armor.
kitmaro chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
Hmm. Wish these chapters were longer. But other then that interesting story. Later.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
Well, well, soldier...

Whoa! Fast update, I see. LOL

Now, LOLs aside, this was very interesting.

Thank Gawd Shego didn't catch an STD AND she'll be healing quickly. :D

Now, she has a place to stay, and Kim will surely bring in the cavalry to track down the sonuvab-i-tch who did this!

Nice work!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Darkshadow-lord chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
Poor Shego! At least she has Kim there for her!
FFaddict007 chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
Awww! Anne was so sweet! And things might get a little akward, what with spreading your legs for your ex-nemesis mom AND having your ex-nem watch. BUt does brutal bastards! Shego shall be avenged! bring on the cavalry.

And also the Possible family do seem like the huggy-feely type.
Capt31 chapter 3 . 1/25/2011
Even as hard a story concept this is to use...I am getting into this and finding myself hooked. Nice use of Mom Possible to turn on her "mother" has a hug for support. I think it worked well and I like the glimpse of Kim's caring for Shego...hoping for more.

Been a rough day for this fanfic addict getting roughed up in other tales...glad you posted this and brought a warm smile along for the ride!;)
sumer11 chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
now i feel really bad for shego. no women should ever go through that. no matter how evil you r. hopefully kim's mom can help her.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
Well, well, soldier...



Poor, poor Shego...D:


(Rage sets in) MAKE Kim RIP the DOUCHEBAG's vocal chords out! (Very, VERY angry face) RAAAAAAAAGEEEEEEEEEEE!

(Takes deep breath)

Ok, I'm good. A

Now, I think I wanna see where this goes. Please, let Shego be Ok! ;O;

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
RogalDorn chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
Chaplain: There is only the EMPEROR! Astartes: HE IS OUR SHIELD and PROTECTOR!

1st Just want to get this out of my Chest.

Long shall BE HIS SUFFERING, GLORIOS shall Be His PAIN! Damnation to him and ever lasting Misery for his life everlasting for his soul shall be cast unto the Darkest Pit, where DEMONS shall forever Toy and Torture his Spirit throughout all ETERNITY! For what he has done to Shego and Emperor help him for I would show no remorse to such FILT when my path shall ever cross his.

Well got to say this was quiet unexpected, due nevertheless an intriguing of a tale that deffinetly deserve praise and creativity for the most part its quiet a twsit on itself that Shego would fall in such circumstance of whom has truly hurt her more than anything else and even left her quiet a shell of her formerself that even I would only WISH for the Person involve to be BATH in the Emperor's cleansing FLAME.

"Only a madman knows no FEAR. A Warrior knows what Fear is, he feels it in his stomach, he understands Fear better than any other mortal can. What makes us strong is that we have CONQUERED FEAR, Overcome it not once but many times, over and over again, until the process has become instinctive. But no matter how many battles you fight and how many victories you win, your Fear will never completely leave you. Learn to live with that Fear. Learn to master your Fear. But never forget that there are things in this universe that even you cannot face and live, abominations so terrible that their very appearance will sear the flesh from your face and shrivel your eyes. Such things cannot be fought, and to confront them would be nothing but a futile waste of life. In those situations remember your vows to serve the Emperor, and remember also that you serve him best alive and not sacrificed upon the altar of vain glory."

Memorum Libris de Petronius Caligarus, Ultramarines Captain
xxDark Angel Babyxx chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
Please update asap
kitmaro chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
Wow, of all the reasons for Shego to be at Kims' door I did not expect that. Later.
Darkshadow-lord chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
Poor Shego! I hope Kim finds the asswhole that did that to Shego and beats the shit out of him! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Capt31 chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
A very hard hitting issue and one that provides no easy answers for the reader. Like the way that you have these two instinctively draw to one another. Also liked that Kim is willing to do what ever is required to get Shego help in getting medical attention. Bringing in her Mom may have some interesting reactions.

Looking forward to your next addition!;)
FFaddict007 chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
And the answer for all problems in the world is... Anne Possible! No!Shego! and Now is when they realise it sucks being wanted in who knows how many states. And good idea with the drink its something very plausible and that people are warned of.
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