Reviews for Unexpected
DarXe chapter 60 . 1/3/2014
Excellent story. I'm glad I found this. Gonna go read the sequel now. :)
Well of Silence chapter 60 . 6/28/2013
I loved it
Nink chapter 3 . 11/15/2012
zmg i'm squeeing already
Guest chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
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Stormy Trix chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Hi. I really enjoy your story. i read it last year.
PleaseDeleteThisAccount123455 chapter 7 . 5/5/2012
Love this story :)
Concolor44 chapter 36 . 4/6/2012
Okay, this is a REALLY LONG STORY (heh ... I'd be something of an expert on that topic) and the action is fast-paced and engaging. That's my excuse for not leaving more reviews, that and the fact that the chapters are short. But this seemed to be a good place to stop and take a breath or two and regroup, mentally.

That Shego went to Kim for help is not only possible, but likely. That Kim would help her ... yeah, pretty much the same. That they would fall into each other's arms so quickly and thoroughly? Hm. Shaky. But I'll give you that one. They HAVE known each other a long time, and the mutual admiration was pretty plain.

But ... Betty Director is Shego's sister? Didn't see that one coming. Or Hego's hatred.

Where this is going with regards to the doomsday devices, I have no clue. But there are 23 more chapters for you to explain things. So as soon as I can (after various necessary home-improvement projects are taken care of) I'll be back. Don't run off.
batman2.0 chapter 60 . 4/4/2012
Yeah I know that now, my silly brain thought he was going to when he said he was afraid to die hahaha, I'm about to start storm, I wish I could've found this sooner so I could read both as they were written but oh well
batman2.0 chapter 54 . 4/4/2012
Wow. He killed Kenny. Really. I was watching South Park while reading this and I laughed so hard I almost passed out due to lack of oxygen and my mom was like dafuq o.O
batman2.0 chapter 45 . 4/4/2012
Aaaaaaaaand Marvin dies. His "fear of dying" gave it away. As soon as I read that I was like f$& really? Hopefully I'm wrong though. I love this story by the way, don't get why anyone wouldn't. Sorry for not reviewing til chapter forty something by the way, just lazy I guess D
Akiho Tonoshi chapter 60 . 2/15/2012
Interesting, chapters are really short:( and I dono, seems to lack something, could just be me *shrug.* Definitely not the worst I've ever seen.

Your rather descriptive and have a good grasp on different reactions, emotion really. But I found myself skipping over parts. Anyways I'll be reading the next story to this for sure, and it seems to be one in the morning... so I'll head to bed night
Goth Albino Angel chapter 54 . 11/24/2011
Masochistic to find pleasure in self-pain. Not to sound like a smartass or anything, but I think you meant sadistic, because Hector likes seeing other people (*cough* Shego/Sara) in pain, not himself. But I'm really enjoying reading your story and i love how you have it set up.
Taeniaea chapter 60 . 11/22/2011
cool story
bellajasp23 chapter 58 . 10/29/2011
love love the story thank u
raptorhunter18 chapter 60 . 9/27/2011
OMG that was an amazing story I will def read the sequel
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