Reviews for Unexpected |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AH you can't leave us now! that's not an ENDING! that's a cliff hanger! haa haa so how's team storm? just the daring double or does the team include the tweebs and shego's siblings? i guess sara can still do amazing feats if she can still work with kim on missions. i have a feeling there is still one more chapter since there is no COMPLETE at the end of this story. ha ha |
![]() ![]() ![]() And that's it folks. It was a good ride. Later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It is always nice to have more...but this ending gave enough to get a glimpse of how they recovered from all the trauma. They still were kicking ass for three years, even without our green goddess's having her gift powered up. Great to see them doing the domestic scene and nice to think they got what they always wanted. Shame its done...especially right when Shego might get her powers back. Great story and very well played!;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice update :) nice way to end also |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah happy ending great story loved every minute of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading this yesterday and can't believe I caught up so fast. I can't help but beg you to add more to the story after the big finale. Your writing style is beautiful, and the plot to this story is such a great mix of romance and action and drama that it always keeps my attention. Please, please, please, don't let it end yet? |
![]() ![]() ![]() love this chapter. as i do all the others. i'm so excited to read the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() see i knew you would give us an M scene...or at least part of one ;P he he yay yay they are still alive and well and their relationship is progressing! you're almost done! |
![]() ![]() Ahh short n sweet, awesome job, can see it slowly coming to its end. Anyways loved it! P |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the update even tho it was sad :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funeral...sad and it is what it is. I feel for Shego and how it would impact Kim here. Like the start of their intimate dance and they both voice the love they have for the other. It was quite sweet and you have to appreciate the concern that Kim has her her love...and being there for her. Well done that!;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD After that ending, I just HAD to read the reviews. haha. Great story, Flame. I especially loved "Oh my god, he killed Kenny!" "You bastard!" XD It got a little corny at times and a little cliché, but all in all full of awesome. ) I send many great big glittery hearts of yay and loads of thanks for writing this. Great stuff, really. ) ~Sin |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! she woke up! seems like things are finally turning around. what surprise are u going to give us next? maybe the powers...and then the M scene in the final chapter ;P haa |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. so glad shego is awake |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whew...our sleeping beauty is back! It was quite telling in the way Kim stood up to Mom and took her stand to stay by her woman. She has grown in this story and gained strength their pairing. Glad you allowed Shego to come back to the land of the living...very well played! Hego and the Director are still in need of facing justice...still hoping for the that!;) |