|Reviews for Heresy|
| kidloco chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
| necro-wulf chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
The scope and metaphysucs here really impresed me. This story is a bit of a job to wrap your head around, but the callenge is what makes reading so enjyable.
| me chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
This story gives me shivers. It's excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Lord Ezra'eil chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
This get's trippy man... Awesome but trippy.
| INDADD chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
I am feeling a bit iffy about this one. I will admit that it is quite interesting and unexpected, but I am still a bit iffy. Only because of the dopplergangers; it sort of goes against my beliefs? thinking? I don't know what exactly, but it bothers me. However, despite that, I am willing to continue forth. :P I am a bit of a masochist, haha.
| Dude chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
This is the most bad ass mind game ever!
| AiSard chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
This fic has me hooked. I still don't understand why your keeping with the title and summary though / I keep getting flashes of WH40k whenever I see the word Heresy p hopefully the reason will pop out sooner or later. Summary isn't that bad I guess, it just seems a little light-hearted and doesn't quite capture the intricate tone you've woven in to the story, which is really really interesting and whats got me hooked p really hope you update more soon, really want to see where your taking this. (we need to go deeperrr)
| violinmana chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
Find the Hokage.
| Herooftimes chapter 7 . 9/4/2012
More. More please, as soon as you can. I'm truly enjoying this story and I almost wish I had discovered it later so there would be more to read now. I liked the first person part at the beginning as well, but I wouldnt want it to be a constant thing.
| Herooftimes chapter 6 . 9/4/2012
I'm definitely, definitely liking this story so far. I've never seen a premise like this before actually. The clones simply staying around somehow is quite scary. I do wonder why that has happened - did Naruto use the kage bunshin wrong? Or does it really happen to all who use it?
| 1nf1n1t3 chapter 7 . 9/3/2012
wow, kinda confusing at the start, but once you get into the plot it's very interesting.
keep up the good work!
| Wonderfully Smitten chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
| RamenKnight chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
What the heck is going on?
| Ravus chapter 7 . 8/29/2012
Very Interesting story. I hope you don't get carried away with all the potential idea something like this can give. Something this surreal needs to stay on track for the most part or interest from the reader will wane.
| DarkghostX chapter 7 . 8/27/2012
I love your writing. You are one of the VERY few good writers here anymore. If getting 6k chapters mean we get a steady writing schedule, then by all means, go for it.
Hope to read more soon.