This is a great story and I hope you get back to it soon. Thank you!

great work

Thank you soo much! I can't believe that this is almost done, it's almost bittersweet . I can't wait to see how this ends. I don't think I've e we read a story where Severus is this caring over all I really love this story

really cool chapter

busted ha ha love it very sweet

Charlie? what happened to Charlie?

Wonderful!

For starters: yay they said "I love you" to each other. Big step in a relationship.

But the conversation and interaction seemed forced. The whole chapter just seemed rushed and spit out, to be honest. That's not to say it wasn't good; on the contrary, you have quite the way with words.

Did Charlie make it out, or did he parish in the rubble? It would be a nice thought to have him run away into the forbidden forest and live wild, if he could have made it out of the dungeons.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with school!

this is great work

It's official: I'm a lurker. I would much rather read a chapter and then keep my thoughts to myself, because no matter what I put down, I couldn't do justice to what I'm actually thinking in my brain. I don't even want to bother logging in. Gosh.

But.

Hermione calls Ron "Ronald" far too often. I have a feeling that you think the given names are just catchier and more proper, or more fun or whatever, which I agree with, but Hermione didn't call him his full name all the time, which is something she seems to be doing.

Also, the romance came about pretty suddenly in these few chapters, but that could just be because you haven't updated in so long and I've forgotten the tension you've built up.

Snape is too friendly. He's not the brooding, antisocial jerk I imagine him being. He's too civil with Hermione, regardless of feelings of affection.

Okay and now for the things you actually care about: I love the way you have turned the story. This new direction is interesting and I cannot wait to see where it leads. Ron under the imperious, and Hermione the next target, not to mention the disappearance of the entire Griffindor house (and what was up with Hermione's bed being the only one untouched?)

Update soon, darling. You are on a roll.

Great story! Can't wait to read lemons! Please update soon such a great story!

wonderful

I wonder what happened to the Gryffindor students?Please post more soon!;)

great work

Wow! What a cliff hanger but a good chapter - looking forward to the next update so we can hopefully find out what's happened!