Reviews for The Voice Of Reason
Amarenima Redwood chapter 25 . 2/6/2013
This is a great story and I hope you get back to it soon. Thank you!
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 24 . 1/16/2013
great work
TheLifeAndTimesOfANerd chapter 23 . 12/30/2012
Thank you soo much! I can't believe that this is almost done, it's almost bittersweet . I can't wait to see how this ends. I don't think I've e we read a story where Severus is this caring over all I really love this story
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 23 . 12/30/2012
really cool chapter
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 22 . 12/23/2012
busted ha ha love it very sweet
TheLifeAndTimesOfANerd chapter 22 . 12/22/2012
Charlie? what happened to Charlie?
Lordhightoppfan chapter 22 . 12/21/2012
yes I am still Alive chapter 21 . 2/26/2012
For starters: yay they said "I love you" to each other. Big step in a relationship.

But the conversation and interaction seemed forced. The whole chapter just seemed rushed and spit out, to be honest. That's not to say it wasn't good; on the contrary, you have quite the way with words.

Did Charlie make it out, or did he parish in the rubble? It would be a nice thought to have him run away into the forbidden forest and live wild, if he could have made it out of the dungeons.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Good luck with school!
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 21 . 2/25/2012
this is great work
You know it's me chapter 20 . 2/1/2012
It's official: I'm a lurker. I would much rather read a chapter and then keep my thoughts to myself, because no matter what I put down, I couldn't do justice to what I'm actually thinking in my brain. I don't even want to bother logging in. Gosh.


Hermione calls Ron "Ronald" far too often. I have a feeling that you think the given names are just catchier and more proper, or more fun or whatever, which I agree with, but Hermione didn't call him his full name all the time, which is something she seems to be doing.

Also, the romance came about pretty suddenly in these few chapters, but that could just be because you haven't updated in so long and I've forgotten the tension you've built up.

Snape is too friendly. He's not the brooding, antisocial jerk I imagine him being. He's too civil with Hermione, regardless of feelings of affection.

Okay and now for the things you actually care about: I love the way you have turned the story. This new direction is interesting and I cannot wait to see where it leads. Ron under the imperious, and Hermione the next target, not to mention the disappearance of the entire Griffindor house (and what was up with Hermione's bed being the only one untouched?)

Update soon, darling. You are on a roll.
Lordhightoppfan chapter 19 . 1/31/2012
Great story! Can't wait to read lemons! Please update soon such a great story!
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 19 . 1/30/2012
MelodySwanMills chapter 19 . 1/29/2012
I wonder what happened to the Gryffindor students?Please post more soon!;)
David boreanaz's wife247 chapter 18 . 1/26/2012
great work
lionessforseverus chapter 18 . 1/25/2012
Wow! What a cliff hanger but a good chapter - looking forward to the next update so we can hopefully find out what's happened!
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